Oceans Mirror

Waves are waters wings
Soaring past the night, upright
Dissolving through time.

Rocks are waters moons,
Attracting gasps and debris,
Perpetual pose.

Shores are waters skies,
Extravagant scenes perform
As Light rays dance round.

By: Sabina Nicole
Contest: 
Written: 7-12-12
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Johnson-Saunders Avatar
July 21, 2012 at 9:06 AM
Beautiful, Sabina! Congrats on your wonderful win!! I love how the water poetically flowed to the next haiku. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:29 PM
thank you hun!!!
Kendrick Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 3:05 PM
Very poetic and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..((()))Congrats on your win...Sara
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:29 PM
Sara, thank you so much!
Dietrich Avatar
July 20, 2012 at 11:59 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest. I really enjoy seeing how each poet has painted their scene!
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Yes, I agree...Thanks again1
Sweetheart Avatar
July 19, 2012 at 12:44 PM
congrats Sabina on a lovely win for this delightful write luv..
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:30 PM
Thanks Girl!
Merryman Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 6:53 PM
Sabina, congrats on your wonderful win with this lovely write! Love, Kim
Nicole Avatar
August 29, 2012 at 5:29 PM
:)
Johnson Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:10 PM
This is very nice Sabina. One of the best of the lot.. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
Nicole Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:20 PM
wow thank you so much!
Williams Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 11:03 AM
Sabina congrats on your win, wonderful picture here..David
Nicole Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:20 PM
Thank You David!
Brown Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 9:36 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Sabina. Love, Carol
Nicole Avatar
July 18, 2012 at 1:21 PM
Thanks carol xo
Poet Avatar
July 12, 2012 at 8:09 PM
very nice imagery here Sabina.Enjoyed the read.
Nicole Avatar
July 13, 2012 at 4:42 AM
thank you:)
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