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Oceans Mirror

Waves are waters wings Soaring past the night, upright Dissolving through time. Rocks are waters moons, Attracting gasps and debris, Perpetual pose. Shores are waters skies, Extravagant scenes perform As Light rays dance round. By: Sabina Nicole Contest: Written: 7-12-12

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Date: 7/21/2012 9:06:00 AM
Beautiful, Sabina! Congrats on your wonderful win!! I love how the water poetically flowed to the next haiku. :)) Have a wonderful weekend. Love and Blessings, Rhonda
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/29/2012 5:29:00 PM
thank you hun!!!
Date: 7/20/2012 3:05:00 PM
Very poetic and descriptive winning work..Enjoyed reading this afternoon..((()))Congrats on your win...Sara
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/29/2012 5:29:00 PM
Sara, thank you so much!
Date: 7/20/2012 11:59:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in this contest. I really enjoy seeing how each poet has painted their scene!
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/29/2012 5:30:00 PM
Yes, I agree...Thanks again1
Date: 7/19/2012 12:44:00 PM
congrats Sabina on a lovely win for this delightful write luv..
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/29/2012 5:30:00 PM
Thanks Girl!
Date: 7/18/2012 6:53:00 PM
Sabina, congrats on your wonderful win with this lovely write! Love, Kim
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 8/29/2012 5:29:00 PM
:)
Date: 7/18/2012 1:10:00 PM
This is very nice Sabina. One of the best of the lot.. Congratulations. Love, Joyce
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/18/2012 1:20:00 PM
wow thank you so much!
Date: 7/18/2012 11:03:00 AM
Sabina congrats on your win, wonderful picture here..David
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/18/2012 1:20:00 PM
Thank You David!
Date: 7/18/2012 9:36:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry placing in Gail's "Scenery"contest Sabina. Love, Carol
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/18/2012 1:21:00 PM
Thanks carol xo
Date: 7/12/2012 8:09:00 PM
very nice imagery here Sabina.Enjoyed the read.
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Sabina Nicole
Date: 7/13/2012 4:42:00 AM
thank you:)

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