Ocean's kiss

My footprints 
are kissed by the ocean 
as I walk the beach 
looking back 
the shoreline becomes an etch a sketch 
leaving divots 
filled with water 
I dodge 
between endless sand castles 
built by creative imaginations 
lost by the fierce kiss 
slowly melting back 
into the water
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Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 8:30 AM
Nothing beats a stroll along the beach with the relaxing sound of the ocean. Tom
Cunningham Avatar
August 27, 2024 at 8:34 AM
Pure heaven Karen
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August 27, 2024 at 8:31 AM
Especially right after you wake up in the morning and watch the sunrise!
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