Oceans

OCEANS When lips share a romantic kiss, Can it be, in that intimate exchange One bears a mist And another holds no such cover? Is this a truth? One heart remains the same And one becomes a lover? Or, in that truth does truth-some lie? One has to play and one must fly? Do these polars make the bind? Of seconds, moments of lives, in kind? And knowing truth is a fleeting thing When change and circumstance is king, It fluctuates, in method, like the sea, And truthful lips lie, somewhere, In the waves that be. 21st April 2021

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Funom Makama

Date: 4/27/2021 7:56:00 PM

Beautifully written with so much grace. Your lines are thick with craft and fascination. Great work.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/28/2021 9:59:00 AM

Thank you so much Funom. I appreciate your comments very much and is a poetic quality in itself as in 'thick with craft and fascination' love it, what a line. i hope you are smiling, thank you again. love and peace xx janine

Susan Ashley

Date: 4/25/2021 6:35:00 PM

Dear Janine, your poetic pen is so very potent and expressive. Your vivid and brilliant imagery brings the hearts' divide to poignant life, for at one time or another we've been the lover to one whose heart had remained the same. A masterwork of such deep, exquisite and graceful poetry, dear poetess. Congratulations for your excellent win in Charlotte's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan

Janine Lever
Date: 4/26/2021 9:36:00 AM

Humbled in your comments. Thank you so much. I feel all my poetry deeply even though sometimes they come rushing in all at once. Thank you again Susan

Gary Radice

Date: 4/25/2021 10:18:00 AM

This is another excellent winner in what has proved to be an excellent contest sponsored by Charlotte. I'm just making my way down the list of winners. Great poetry Janine. Congratulations.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/25/2021 11:09:00 AM

Thank you so much for your comments i really appreciate them. Am delighted.

Brian Sambourne

Date: 4/25/2021 9:06:00 AM

An excellent, memorable submission. The divide suggested in the lines "...One heart remains the same And one becomes a lover" is vivid in its truth. Congratulations! Brian

Janine Lever
Date: 4/25/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you very much for your comments, i am a very surprised but delighted winner. I liked this poem when it came rushing in like the ocean itself!

Christuraj Alex

Date: 4/25/2021 5:50:00 AM

Congratulations!

Janine Lever
Date: 4/25/2021 11:10:00 AM

Thank you Christuraj. much appreciated.

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 4/25/2021 4:42:00 AM

i really liked this one (think i would label it rhyme rather than free verse) it has a lovely, lyrical flow to it, like water! a lot packed into a compact poem, profound wording and message - congrats on your win in my contest!

Janine Lever
Date: 4/25/2021 11:12:00 AM

I am in awe of your comments, thank you so much and yes it came rushing in like the ocean, and i love water, especially rivers and streams and brooks. I feel the poems very deeply and i thank you for my win. Greatly appreciated Charlotte.xx

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 4/21/2021 10:58:00 AM

Hello Janine Lever, so nic3 to meet you. Just by reading this poem made me see the ocean in a different way. enjoy your day my friend.

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 4/21/2021 3:41:00 PM

Hello Janine Lever, I am pleased to hear this. I love the water, any body of water. The waves the sounds of the waves to me relaxing. It is nice to meetyou. enjoy your day my friend.

Janine Lever
Date: 4/21/2021 11:01:00 AM

Thank you for your comments i really appreciate them. Yes, the ocean breathes, like us, and has waves and tides, like us, and life itself. Thank you again you gave me happiness.