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Ocean Waves Haiku

Clashing upon the sand Waves of thunder hit land Ocean Shore Sponsored by: Tania Kitchin Contest Name: Ocean Waves Haiku Date Created: 01/26/2019

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Nette Onclaud

Date: 1/27/2019 8:20:00 AM

a vibrant ocean haiku, bobby... keep going!..huggs

Alexis Y.

Date: 1/27/2019 7:32:00 AM

Hi Bobby, I love the ocean and I enjoyed your beautiful haiku. I wish you the best of luck in the contest:-) Alexis

Tom Cunningham

Date: 1/27/2019 6:12:00 AM

No better place to get inspired than the ocean. Have soupmailed you. Tom.

Gershon Wolf

Date: 1/26/2019 8:56:00 PM

I like everything about this poem---everything. If I gazed out on the ocean for the rest of my life, I would never get bored. :) gw

Bobby May
Date: 1/26/2019 8:59:00 PM

Me too Gershon!! I LOVE the ocean!! thank you my friend