Ocean Waves

Ocean Waves Like the waves of the ocean that come in so strong, that's the way you came into my life, with such force that in your arms, your kisses and your love I got lost. The force of the waves seperated us one day and we couldn't get back together again. I never knew the places you had been to, or what kind of lovers you had loved. Maybe You went to different places in a world I never knew. Maybe the lovers you had betryed you. I don't know, or could it be that you didn't understand them. I was not from your world and I couldn't understand you. I still watch the ocean waves , but not with you...
10/18/2013 Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo
Copyright © | Year Posted 2013


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Date: 11/28/2013 7:11:00 PM
Very sad [as love lost is!] Haven't heard from you in a bit I hope all is well? Light & Love
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Date: 10/30/2013 7:52:00 PM
oooh... very beautiful, Lucilla... Terry
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Date: 10/20/2013 8:00:00 AM
Nice expression of love without any hope beautifully expressed. Loved always, bl
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:11:00 PM
this is really nice, and I loved that ending where you put yourself with someone else!
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Date: 10/19/2013 8:21:00 PM
What a well written but pensive reflective sad poem. Well done.
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:38:00 PM
how you wove this with languid expression and ended it with " not knowing" is terribly engaging, lucy... what a fine write!..:) huggs
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Date: 10/19/2013 11:27:00 AM
love the power of your waves and your love, also your poetry...
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:10:00 AM
This is one of your best! Straight to my favorites. Very powerful imagery and emotion.
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Date: 10/19/2013 9:12:00 AM
P.s. I finished my watch poem.
Date: 10/19/2013 5:56:00 AM
- Ocean waves has its own power ...... they come and go ..... - Life "waves" do the same .... - Touching and beautiful, dear Lucilla! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 10/19/2013 5:28:00 AM
beautiful Thoughts
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:37:00 AM
Hola Lucilla, I enjoyed this warm and heartfelt write..Buen trabajo! Ken
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:21:00 AM
Love comes so quick, like mighty waves of the Ocean that inundate.....same strong waves do separate lovers...true. The usual subject of love has been approached differently using a unique simile. This is great poetry Lucilla. I've learned one or two from you. Thanks for sharing. Friend JM
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Date: 10/19/2013 4:21:00 AM
Love comes so quick, like mighty waves of the Ocean that inundate.....same strong waves do separate lovers...true. The usual subject of love has been approached differently using a unique simile. This is great poetry Lucilla. I've learned one or two from you. Thanks for sharing. Friend JM
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Date: 10/19/2013 3:26:00 AM
Lucy, my dear, what a lovely and youthful writing! It has touched the core of my heart! The important thing is always the moments you shared together! Love it! 7!
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Date: 10/18/2013 11:36:00 PM
This is an exquisite write my friend! You have written a special poem of an intense love come and gone! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening piece this evening! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!
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