Lucilla Carrillo Poet Free verse

Ocean Waves

Ocean Waves

Like the waves of the ocean that come in so strong,
that's the way you came into my life, with such force 
that in your arms, your kisses and your love I got lost.

The force of the waves seperated us one day and we
couldn't get back together again. I never knew the
places you had been to, or what kind of lovers you 
had loved.

Maybe You went to different places in a world I never
knew. Maybe the lovers you had betryed you. I don't
know, or could it be that you didn't understand them.
I was not from your world and I couldn't understand 
you. I still watch the ocean waves , but not with you... 

10/18/2013
Written by Lucilla M. Carrillo

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Debbie Guzzi November 28, 2013 at 7:11 PM Very sad [as love lost is!] Haven't heard from you in a bit I hope all is well? Light & Love

Terry O'Leary October 30, 2013 at 7:52 PM oooh... very beautiful, Lucilla... Terry

Bl Devnath October 20, 2013 at 8:00 AM Nice expression of love without any hope beautifully expressed. Loved always, bl

Andrea Dietrich October 19, 2013 at 11:11 PM this is really nice, and I loved that ending where you put yourself with someone else!

Jon A Cavanaugh October 19, 2013 at 8:21 PM What a well written but pensive reflective sad poem. Well done.

Nette Onclaud October 19, 2013 at 5:38 PM how you wove this with languid expression and ended it with " not knowing" is terribly engaging, lucy... what a fine write!..:) huggs

Harry Horsman October 19, 2013 at 11:27 AM love the power of your waves and your love, also your poetry...

Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2013 at 9:10 AM This is one of your best! Straight to my favorites. Very powerful imagery and emotion. Richard Lamoureux October 19, 2013 at 9:12 AM P.s. I finished my watch poem.

Anne-Lise Andresen October 19, 2013 at 5:56 AM - Ocean waves has its own power ...... they come and go ..... - Life "waves" do the same .... - Touching and beautiful, dear Lucilla! - Have a great weekend. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Dia Alshirqati October 19, 2013 at 5:28 AM beautiful Thoughts

Ken Carroll October 19, 2013 at 4:37 AM Hola Lucilla, I enjoyed this warm and heartfelt write..Buen trabajo! Ken

Joseph Matose October 19, 2013 at 4:21 AM Love comes so quick, like mighty waves of the Ocean that inundate.....same strong waves do separate lovers...true. The usual subject of love has been approached differently using a unique simile. This is great poetry Lucilla. I've learned one or two from you. Thanks for sharing. Friend JM

Joseph Matose October 19, 2013 at 4:21 AM Love comes so quick, like mighty waves of the Ocean that inundate.....same strong waves do separate lovers...true. The usual subject of love has been approached differently using a unique simile. This is great poetry Lucilla. I've learned one or two from you. Thanks for sharing. Friend JM

Demetrios Trifiatis October 19, 2013 at 3:26 AM Lucy, my dear, what a lovely and youthful writing! It has touched the core of my heart! The important thing is always the moments you shared together! Love it! 7!

Russell Sivey October 18, 2013 at 11:36 PM This is an exquisite write my friend! You have written a special poem of an intense love come and gone! I really enjoyed reading this enlightening piece this evening! What a fantastic poem, Great Work!!