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Ocean Versus Pool

Ocean Versus Pool The days are hot, the water cool, but unlike days beside my pool, the ocean lives a moving thing, with surf and sand it has its fling, and far out past the eye can see, instead of woods, the sky meets sea…delightful choice for me! © Sandra M. Haight 2015 All Rights Reserved ~6th Place~ Contest: Fibonacci Sponsor: Rob Carmack Judged: 03/14/2015 Syllables Checked: 1-1-2-3-5-8-13-21 .

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2015 10:20:00 PM

awe, thank you once again for such a sweet reply... PD

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/20/2015 10:49:00 PM

Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/23/2015 7:41:00 PM

Thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats, Linda. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick

Date: 3/18/2015 9:08:00 AM

Ahhh!!! Congrats on your winning work...Sara

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2015 7:28:00 PM

Hi Sara, thank you! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman

Date: 3/17/2015 5:36:00 PM

I love that you were able to use rhyme in this. It gave your poem an easy-going lilt. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/18/2015 7:29:00 PM

Kim, I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Happy that you found the rhyme a nice addition. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A

Date: 3/15/2015 11:49:00 PM

SANDRA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:24:00 PM

Thank you, Skat. So nice of you to visit and express congrats. Sandra

Eve Roper

Date: 3/15/2015 11:21:00 AM

Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:24:00 PM

Thank you so much, Eve, for your congrats and support. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus

Date: 3/15/2015 7:54:00 AM

Hi Sandra!....and you made a delightful choice writing about this topic! Give me the ocean any time! Congrats on a very merited win! // paul

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:25:00 PM

Yes, Paul...we experience both during the Summer, and there's no comparison. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Thanks so much! Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 3/15/2015 4:06:00 AM

I like to take a dip Sandra.. :) what a cool poem you have.. :)! congrats!! Happy Sunday.. :)! //olive eloisa

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:26:00 PM

Thanks, Olive. So nice to receive your nice comment and congratulations. Really appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma

Date: 3/15/2015 12:59:00 AM

Beautiful !! Very creative Sandra! Big congrats!!

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:27:00 PM

Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Sandra

Jan Allison

Date: 3/14/2015 8:41:00 PM

absolutely delightful - a 7 from me and congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:30:00 PM

Hi Jan, thank you again for your huge support and encouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra

Reason A. Poteet

Date: 3/14/2015 8:16:00 PM

great comparison between the two, here, Sandra. Well-said without issue. Congratulations on your placement.

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/17/2015 5:31:00 PM

Hi Reason, thank you for stopping by with your positive comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/14/2015 7:46:00 PM

Congratulations on a great win, Sandra!! Well deserved, lovely piece. Hugs, Kimberly xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/14/2015 8:12:00 PM

Thank you so much, Kimberly. I really liked your very much too. Hugs, Sandra

Poesy Relish

Date: 3/10/2015 11:35:00 AM

Awesome pen Sandra #7... lov n hugs, nad!

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2015 6:43:00 PM

Thank you, Nad. It was fun working on. I appreciate your support. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/10/2015 1:20:00 AM

Awesome Fibonacci, Sandra, and the ocean wins hands down! Hugs, rhonda

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2015 6:44:00 PM

Thank you, Rhonda. Yes, no comparison for sure. I appreciate your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw

Date: 3/9/2015 8:52:00 PM

Ohhh, this is wonderful, Sandra! I love every line! Good luck with this fantastic poem. hugs, Kimberly xx

Sandra Haight
Date: 3/13/2015 6:47:00 PM

Thank you, Kimberly, I appreciate your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra