Sandra Haight Poet Fibonacci

Ocean Versus Pool

Ocean Versus Pool


The
days
are hot,
the water
cool, but unlike days
beside my pool, the ocean lives
a moving thing, with surf and sand it has its fling, and
far out past the eye can see, instead of woods, the sky meets sea…delightful choice for me!


© Sandra M. Haight 2015 
   All Rights Reserved


~6th Place~
Contest: Fibonacci
Sponsor: Rob Carmack
Judged: 03/14/2015

Syllables Checked: 1-1-2-3-5-8-13-21



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Poet Destroyer A March 29, 2015 at 10:20 PM awe, thank you once again for such a sweet reply... PD

Poet Destroyer A March 20, 2015 at 10:49 PM Sandra, Congratulations on your awesome Fibonacci win :):):) Luv ~LINDA~ Sandra Haight March 23, 2015 at 7:41 PM Thank you so much for stopping by with your nice comment and congrats, Linda. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

Sara Kendrick March 18, 2015 at 9:08 AM Ahhh!!! Congrats on your winning work...Sara Sandra Haight March 18, 2015 at 7:28 PM Hi Sara, thank you! I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Merryman March 17, 2015 at 5:36 PM I love that you were able to use rhyme in this. It gave your poem an easy-going lilt. Congrats on your win! Love, Kim Sandra Haight March 18, 2015 at 7:29 PM Kim, I appreciate your positive comment and congrats. Happy that you found the rhyme a nice addition. Hugs, Sandra

Skat A March 15, 2015 at 11:49 PM SANDRA, CONGRATULATIONS, on your Fibonacci WIN! ~SKAT Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:24 PM Thank you, Skat. So nice of you to visit and express congrats. Sandra

Eve Roper March 15, 2015 at 11:21 AM Congratulation on this wonderful win and a 7 Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:24 PM Thank you so much, Eve, for your congrats and support. I really appreciate it. Hugs, Sandra

Paul Callus March 15, 2015 at 7:54 AM Hi Sandra!....and you made a delightful choice writing about this topic! Give me the ocean any time! Congrats on a very merited win! // paul Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:25 PM Yes, Paul...we experience both during the Summer, and there's no comparison. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Thanks so much! Sandra

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser March 15, 2015 at 4:06 AM I like to take a dip Sandra.. :) what a cool poem you have.. :)! congrats!! Happy Sunday.. :)! //olive eloisa Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:26 PM Thanks, Olive. So nice to receive your nice comment and congratulations. Really appreciated. Hugs, Sandra

Dr. Upma A. Sharma March 15, 2015 at 12:59 AM Beautiful !! Very creative Sandra! Big congrats!! Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:27 PM Thank you, Dr. Upma. I appreciate your nice comment and congrats. Sandra

Jan Allison March 14, 2015 at 8:41 PM absolutely delightful - a 7 from me and congrats on your win:-) Hugs Jan xx Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:30 PM Hi Jan, thank you again for your huge support and encouraging comments. Hugs, Sandra

Reason A. Poteet March 14, 2015 at 8:16 PM great comparison between the two, here, Sandra. Well-said without issue. Congratulations on your placement. Sandra Haight March 17, 2015 at 5:31 PM Hi Reason, thank you for stopping by with your positive comments and congrats. Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw March 14, 2015 at 7:46 PM Congratulations on a great win, Sandra!! Well deserved, lovely piece. Hugs, Kimberly xx Sandra Haight March 14, 2015 at 8:12 PM Thank you so much, Kimberly. I really liked your very much too. Hugs, Sandra

Poesy Relish March 10, 2015 at 11:35 AM Awesome pen Sandra #7... lov n hugs, nad! Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 6:43 PM Thank you, Nad. It was fun working on. I appreciate your support. Hugs, Sandra

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders March 10, 2015 at 1:20 AM Awesome Fibonacci, Sandra, and the ocean wins hands down! Hugs, rhonda Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 6:44 PM Thank you, Rhonda. Yes, no comparison for sure. I appreciate your positive comment! Hugs, Sandra

Kim Shaw March 9, 2015 at 8:52 PM Ohhh, this is wonderful, Sandra! I love every line! Good luck with this fantastic poem. hugs, Kimberly xx Sandra Haight March 13, 2015 at 6:47 PM Thank you, Kimberly, I appreciate your nice comment. Hugs, Sandra