Ocean Treasure

Oh ocean of that long-gone embryo
Careening stormy erratic, to pacific
Ever sculpting in navy-wavy trance
Atop your peaks diamond ambrosia
Never-never dreams, you've grown ~

Troughs, they stripped fear’s heart
Rendering a wanderer, now braver
Enameling away sea-shine opaline
as Nautili curling their striped sola
Soak me up to float down in blues
undulating in the sunk, spilled sou
roughened in a barnacle-concealer

Estuary-rich, unfurl the flowing life ~


(11/13/2020)
Copyright © | Year Posted 2020

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Kiser Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 12:46 AM
Wonderfully crafted, I love this, "Enameling away sea-shine opaline as Nautili curling their striped sola". Beautiful.
Woodrow Avatar
January 19, 2021 at 9:34 AM
Thank you :)
One Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 9:14 AM
You have always been inspired by the ocean and your words are a lovely ode to honour it..
Woodrow Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:08 PM
its what happens when you live your childhood either surrounded or immersed in it! thanks SO :)
Cunningham Avatar
November 14, 2020 at 6:30 AM
Nothing beats the ocean, it has a certain magic about it. Well written Susan. Tom
Woodrow Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:05 PM
yes, it certainly lures many ..thank you Tom :)
Crabtree Avatar
November 13, 2020 at 9:48 PM
Wonderful poem, Susan. I love the ocean :)
Woodrow Avatar
November 15, 2020 at 6:03 PM
thank you, Angela...yes the ocean draws many :)
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