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"OCEAN OF TIME" FROM MY ROOF TOP GARDEN< 31 JULY 2017, MY PHOTO,©

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Alas, Man eternally swims into the ocean of time condemned never its shores to reach! © Demetrios Trifiatis 31 July 2017

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/31/2017 11:00:00 PM

I stay away from the ocean, I don't know how to swim.. so I think I am saved... :) Hugs ~*

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 11:48:00 PM

The only way to stay out of the ocean of time is not to be born dear, Eve. Once born you have to swim. Enjoy the swim as Richard suggests! If you had read the other Mononoku you would have to entire picture! Thank you my friend!

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 7/31/2017 12:05:00 PM

I guess it's best to enjoy the swim.

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 11:48:00 PM

That is the answer my friend, Richard! Thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/31/2017 7:44:00 AM

- "Ocean of time" ... a great picture of the life we live today, my friend - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 8:00:00 AM

Thank you my dearest friend, Anne-Lise, for your gracious visit! Hugs

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 7:24:00 AM

Not a warning my friend, just a sad reality of life.. some sit on the shore and just watch the waves go by... Think I have gone off on a tangent lol

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:30:00 AM

In my poem there are no shores to be reached! No eschatology!

Silent One

Date: 7/31/2017 5:54:00 AM

A bit like transcendental time.. sadly so many drown..

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:11:00 AM

Is that a...warning? Thank you!

Maria Williams

Date: 7/31/2017 5:52:00 AM

Ah my friend, if I ready you correctly, I interpret that as mortals, individually, our doom to stay in the constraints of time as we know it...Maria xx

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 7:14:00 AM

My dearest, Maria, as mortals in the middle of the ocean of time, without any shores in sight, doesn't make much difference how you... interpret it! Thank you my friend for your lovely visit!

White Wolf

Date: 7/31/2017 4:10:00 AM

Excellent! Perhaps it has no shores!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 5:33:00 AM

Delighted to see you my friend, White Wolf, visiting and commenting! Perhaps you are right! We cannot think time as having shores or as not having shores!Haha! Thank you!

Russell Sivey

Date: 7/31/2017 3:56:00 AM

We don't reach them as man, but as the spirit we do! We don't get restricted like we are now, we'll be free! Your write here is even better than the one before this one! You keep improving upon yourself my friend...that is very good! I hope that I improve in my poetry ever poem I write, but I know sometimes I fall backwards with some of them. Oh well, you learn. But this poem doesn't need any help. It is perfect the way it is! Awesome Work!!

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 5:31:00 AM

What you say about the spiritual Man is true my dear friend, Russell but you have noticed that I refer to Man! Thank you so very much for your precious comments. We, as poets, should always strife to improve ourselves and our writing! God bless you!

Winged Warrior

Date: 7/31/2017 3:51:00 AM

That's because we don't have enough time lol...intelligent monoku my friend...^WW^

Demetrios Trifiatis
Date: 7/31/2017 5:28:00 AM

If you had read my other Monoku you would have seen my reply! Thank you so much dearest WW for your kind visit and comment!