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On the chunk of stone, ocean's extreme heaviness, amongst my weeping.
Written: August 6, 2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021




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Date: 8/7/2021 7:23:00 AM
Deep and beautiful... Lovely haiku...
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Date: 8/7/2021 9:58:00 AM
Thank you, Kannan, appreciate your comment.
Date: 8/7/2021 4:10:00 AM
The ocean has so many moods, it almost reflects our emotions...Delice
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:20:00 AM
Thank you so much Delice, for the kind words. Have a blessed weekend
Date: 8/7/2021 4:07:00 AM
I believe the ocean can relate to our tears, and when we are sad, it engulfs our tears and refreshes our soul. Go to the sea as often as you can dear friend, its a healing place, Much love :)
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:18:00 AM
Appreciate your kindness and your great words, you shed more allure on this Haiku, have a blessed weekend
Date: 8/7/2021 3:27:00 AM
A profoundly deep and heavy haiku, an emotional gravitas oozes off the page, great writing, cheers David
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:15:00 AM
Appreciated your very generous visit and delightful words, David. Have a blessed weekend
Date: 8/7/2021 2:59:00 AM
- A great haiku, Las :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:14:00 AM
Thank you so much Anne-Lise, have a blessed weekend too. Thanks
Date: 8/7/2021 2:17:00 AM
A very thought provoking haiku Lasaad. Hope you have a lovely weekend. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:13:00 AM
Thank you so much, Tom, appreciate your kind words, have a blessed weekend
Date: 8/7/2021 1:07:00 AM
You're aiming at a haiku king? Well written.
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Date: 8/7/2021 4:10:00 AM
Thank you so much Victor, just trying to do my best my friend. Have a nice weekend

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