Ocean of Tears

On the chunk of stone,
ocean's extreme heaviness,
amongst my weeping.


Written: August 6, 2021

angstbereavementconflictconfusionhaiku

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Supraja Kannan

August 7, 2021 at 7:23 AM

Deep and beautiful... Lovely haiku...

Sotto Poet

August 7, 2021 at 9:58 AM

Thank you, Kannan, appreciate your comment.

Delice Arleen Skelly

August 7, 2021 at 4:10 AM

The ocean has so many moods, it almost reflects our emotions...Delice

Sotto Poet

August 7, 2021 at 4:20 AM

Thank you so much Delice, for the kind words. Have a blessed weekend

Mystic Rose Rose

August 7, 2021 at 4:07 AM

I believe the ocean can relate to our tears, and when we are sad, it engulfs our tears and refreshes our soul. Go to the sea as often as you can dear friend, its a healing place, Much love :)

Sotto Poet

August 7, 2021 at 4:18 AM

Appreciate your kindness and your great words, you shed more allure on this Haiku, have a blessed weekend