Ocean of My Own Wisdom

The ancient poet's words I cease to need 
I will rest on wisdom
on my own written words 
a prophetic word(eight thousand days ago)
a youthful boy now speaking to his elder
striving is over
”...an ocean refuses no river.”
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Kendrick Avatar
December 13, 2025 at 3:52 AM
Good idea to add to the world's sayings. Each stream of water has to flow to the lowest point until there is no place left to go. Thanks for sharing this information with us. Congratulations on it being featured on homepage today. Way to go. Sara K
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December 13, 2025 at 12:15 AM
Good flow in-deed Julus.) Great to read.'
Agustin Avatar
October 12, 2025 at 11:49 PM
Thanks for sharing this... exposing your thoughts through your unique poetic style. Welcome to Poetry Soup. I welcome you with the love of the Lord, expressed by John 3:16 of the Bible, "For God so loved the world, that he gave his only begotten Son, that whosoever believeth in him should not perish, but have everlasting life." Be blessed.
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