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Ocean Motion

Ocean motion
Wave after wave
A sweet enclave
This commotion
The ocean enters
My heart tis true
Moving to undo
Wreckage splinters
Ocean motion
Where waves reside
Kingdom divide
Underwater salvation

Russell Sivey

Copyright © Russell Sivey | Year Posted 2013

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Wilma Neels Date: 6/11/2013 1:05:00 PM Russell I love the message you bring across especially love how you ended this one. You make rhyme look so easy and I really enjoy reading your gems. Hope your week is a brilliant one ;) tc my friend Login to Reply

Richard D Seal Date: 6/5/2013 4:35:00 PM Very good write Russell, takes me to oceans edge, can smell and taste the sea. Take care, Richard Login to Reply

Constance La France Date: 6/5/2013 6:28:00 AM Russell, this is very nice, I also love the movement of waves, something so soothing about it but there is the potential and power for destruction within that beauty also, and thanks for all your wonderful support of my poetry,Constance Login to Reply

Cory Long Date: 6/5/2013 6:09:00 AM You are a true poet through and through. You can master any form and do it with elegance and beauty. This is an awesome poem. Thank you for stopping by... Cory Login to Reply

Debra Mundine Date: 6/5/2013 5:14:00 AM Poem of a few words, but packed with content. Nice! Login to Reply

Demetrios Trifiatis Date: 6/5/2013 4:15:00 AM Profound as the ocean! Powerful as the waves! Sweet as honey! My rating for this work is 7! Thank you RUSSELL! Login to Reply