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Ocean Motion

Ocean motion Wave after wave A sweet enclave This commotion The ocean enters My heart tis true Moving to undo Wreckage splinters Ocean motion Where waves reside Kingdom divide Underwater salvation Russell Sivey

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Wilma Neels

Date: 6/11/2013 1:05:00 PM

Russell I love the message you bring across especially love how you ended this one. You make rhyme look so easy and I really enjoy reading your gems. Hope your week is a brilliant one ;) tc my friend

Richard D Seal

Date: 6/5/2013 4:35:00 PM

Very good write Russell, takes me to oceans edge, can smell and taste the sea. Take care, Richard

Constance La France

Date: 6/5/2013 6:28:00 AM

Russell, this is very nice, I also love the movement of waves, something so soothing about it but there is the potential and power for destruction within that beauty also, and thanks for all your wonderful support of my poetry,Constance

Cory Long

Date: 6/5/2013 6:09:00 AM

You are a true poet through and through. You can master any form and do it with elegance and beauty. This is an awesome poem. Thank you for stopping by... Cory

Debra Mundine

Date: 6/5/2013 5:14:00 AM

Poem of a few words, but packed with content. Nice!

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 6/5/2013 4:15:00 AM

Profound as the ocean! Powerful as the waves! Sweet as honey! My rating for this work is 7! Thank you RUSSELL!