Russell Sivey Poet Enclosed Rhyme

Ocean Motion

Ocean motion
Wave after wave
A sweet enclave
This commotion
The ocean enters
My heart tis true
Moving to undo
Wreckage splinters
Ocean motion
Where waves reside
Kingdom divide
Underwater salvation

Russell Sivey

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Wilma Neels June 11, 2013 at 1:05 PM Russell I love the message you bring across especially love how you ended this one. You make rhyme look so easy and I really enjoy reading your gems. Hope your week is a brilliant one ;) tc my friend

Richard D Seal June 5, 2013 at 4:35 PM Very good write Russell, takes me to oceans edge, can smell and taste the sea. Take care, Richard

Constance La France June 5, 2013 at 6:28 AM Russell, this is very nice, I also love the movement of waves, something so soothing about it but there is the potential and power for destruction within that beauty also, and thanks for all your wonderful support of my poetry,Constance

Cory Long June 5, 2013 at 6:09 AM You are a true poet through and through. You can master any form and do it with elegance and beauty. This is an awesome poem. Thank you for stopping by... Cory

Debra Mundine June 5, 2013 at 5:14 AM Poem of a few words, but packed with content. Nice!

Demetrios Trifiatis June 5, 2013 at 4:15 AM Profound as the ocean! Powerful as the waves! Sweet as honey! My rating for this work is 7! Thank you RUSSELL!