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Ocean hiku

salt themed oceans

hold mankinds amazement ~

seas drift aloof

appreciationcharacteroceanhaiku

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Andrea Dietrich

Date: 8/4/2025 11:11:00 AM

More congrats on your win with this one!s soupmail.

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 6/1/2018 5:45:00 PM

hello Cay Cay, oh to be by the water would be good right now. i like the way you described the water. have a nice evening my friend.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/13/2018 3:11:00 PM

STopping by with my congratulations and hoping all is well, dear Caycay. a very happy Mother's Day to you. I sent you some emails but I realize you might not have time to respond. Just know I am thinking of you.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/12/2018 7:14:00 PM

Dropping back with my congratulations CayCay:-) hugs Jan xx

Eve Roper

Date: 5/12/2018 2:46:00 PM

Congratulations on your great win, CayCay, love the imagery it's fabulous... eve

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/12/2018 8:36:00 AM

- Congratulations on your great 3rd place in the contest, CayCay :) - Happy Weekend :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/11/2018 11:36:00 PM

Congrats on your podium finish, CayCay. Well done.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/8/2018 6:20:00 PM

I love that last line, Caycay. The ocean is so vast, we feel lost in it. Saw you at someone's poem and just wanted to say hi. I am putting off Soup till tomorrow. I need to get to dishes and my workout, and just saw an email that we are below 0 in our main account. I can't believe hubbie did not put money in the bank to cover his huge business expense this week!! oh my

S.Zaynab Kamoonpuri

Date: 5/7/2018 2:03:00 AM

"Ocean's conduct" wow creatively said. A super cool oceanic haiku. Kudos. Pleez do add your thoughts/ comment on my newest poem too,

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/5/2018 9:07:00 PM

The tug between the lukewarm ocean and the passion of the sailor!

Matthew Anish

Date: 5/5/2018 8:59:00 PM

Nice personification of the ocean! Peace & Love Matthew Anish

Tom Cunningham

Date: 5/5/2018 4:20:00 PM

Just love the sea , who doesn't, just back from a cruise. Always look at in awe. Good luck. Tom.

Heidi Sands

Date: 5/5/2018 2:51:00 PM

Very nice Haiku. I feel like I am there :)

Eileen Manassian

Date: 5/5/2018 2:22:00 PM

:) I'm intrigued..alright! Lovely haiku. The sea does swell my admiration. Gives me the luxury of freedom of thought. I see it has granted you freedom of expression.

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/5/2018 10:40:00 AM

Beautiful expression, CayCay. Well done.

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/5/2018 11:16:00 AM

Thank you, Line - I am pleased you enjoyed the haiku. Poetry hugs ... CayCay

Jan Allison

Date: 5/5/2018 10:05:00 AM

lovely haiku CayCay I love reading poems about the sea, I often get inspiration when we are out walking along the coastal paths - always carry my notebook with me:-) hugs jan xx

CayCay Jennings
Date: 5/5/2018 10:34:00 AM

There are so many depths to explore creatively concerning the ocean. To capture the enthralling wonderment it causes humans would be intoxicating, wouldn't it? You take care and tell your husband he is honored in the States for his exceptional husband-ways. Blessings ... CayCay