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Ocean Dreams

The bright radiant sun hits me thru the oddly shaped clouds Hot crystal like sand beneath my feet. The soft touch of the ocean's breeze, glad we could meet. The waves crash ashore- mother natures band. I feel free as the angry tide tugs at my hand. Into the ocean I go Swim against the tide Let the waves take you for a midnight ride Swim towards the moon Yeah, I'll make it if I try As I listen to the ocean cry.

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 6/2/2011 1:05:00 PM

Love the new found inspiration of poets I have been reading today. Glad to see your poetry among them Danny. May the sun always shine down upon you and continue to bring inspiration to your soul. Love, Carol

Ned Flanders

Date: 6/2/2011 11:32:00 AM

I think this is a quite marvelous poem that takes me to your time and place... but.. starting off in bright sunshine and ending by the moons rays.. mmm, a long day indeed.. but i do like a lot about this.. "mother natures band" is excellent and so is stanza two line two.. if i am missing something please say.. enjoyed a lot cheers.