Ocean Change (Septet)
Atlantic
Churns deeply, currents
As they set waves to new shores
New inspiration for another
As sands shift with the ebb tide
So the mind then sees
The beauty
Septet syllable count is 3,5,7,9,7,5,3, unrhymed
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