Ocean Breeze And Palm Trees

I once heard someone told me
that the beach is our utopian paradise
where the ocean breeze meets the horizon
and where the sun 
would blow its warm kisses down at us

A glorious  place 
where we can slide down 
the barks of the palm trees  
with a bundle of coconuts
to crack open with a machete in the sand
taking sips of Sky Juice 
to energize our hearts
where the gin hidden within 
would have us gazing at the clouds 
floating above the palm tree leaves
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April 20, 2026 at 11:53 AM
Dear Mia, I was swept up on sips of "Sky juice" and the beauty of your poem. Fantastic imagery brings me there with my imagination to enjoy the "ocean breeze and palm trees" with you. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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