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Ocean Breeze


loose tumbling sea breeze
sets waves of tense limbs free –
empty beach chairs


For SKAT's Picture Perfect 2 Contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015




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Date: 11/16/2015 5:59:00 PM
I missed this one but glad I see it now. Cloudy and rainy here but I enjoyed the sea, sand and warm breeze. Sitting here visiting with you . . . "yes, family is fine . . . and yours . . . good!!"
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 11/16/2015 8:40:00 PM
Yes, my family is fine. My days have been dark, and they are my God-given light. Without them...well, I don't like to think about it...glad to hear your family is good. I didn't know you had been away because I haven't been here in months myself. I'm trying to write again...looking for an escape. Thanks for the visit. It brings a smile to my face.
Date: 10/2/2015 9:15:00 AM
A maze of meanings expressed in few words
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samiha zubair
Date: 10/2/2015 9:16:00 AM
A difficult feat
Date: 7/5/2015 6:07:00 PM
Of course it's a win. Great imagination.
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Date: 6/26/2015 8:08:00 AM
A delightful haiku, Rhonda; the image you present is perfect! Congrats on a fine win. hugs // paul
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Date: 6/25/2015 9:25:00 PM
big congrats, RHonda I wrote an etheree years ago with this same "idea" of the empty beach chairs. I really love that last line.
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Date: 6/25/2015 8:59:00 AM
Great mood! Congrats!
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Date: 6/25/2015 5:02:00 AM
congrats on placing Rhonda hugs
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Date: 6/25/2015 1:28:00 AM
Rhonda... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**
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Date: 6/23/2015 5:01:00 AM
- Rhonda, a beautiful haiku ! - Good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 6/21/2015 1:11:00 AM
Rhonda, this a beautiful haiku. I love going to the beach. Great job. Good luck in the contest:)Alexis
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Date: 6/20/2015 3:26:00 PM
Oh...I do love the beach, Rhonda. Hope to get some sun next week. Lovely haiku...Loved that first line....Hugs, dear.
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Date: 6/20/2015 9:02:00 AM
A beautiful beach image. You put me there. My best to you in the contest.
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:23:00 AM
Thanks, Darlene!
Date: 6/20/2015 1:05:00 AM
Are you inviting me? :)
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:25:00 AM
Anytime! It's a little hot right now on the Florida beaches, Arthur, but winters are beautiful. :) hugs
Date: 6/19/2015 9:09:00 PM
oh YES, Now THAT is a picture perfect haiku
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/20/2015 10:27:00 AM
Thanks, Andrea...I'm not sure what SKAT's looking for...I hope she likes it.
Date: 6/19/2015 8:18:00 PM
tumbling sea breeze along with lightning will cause a lot of empty beach chairs..reminds me..what became of your florida contest?
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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders
Date: 6/19/2015 8:30:00 PM
It's judged and ready to post...was waiting for calmer waters around here. I may be waiting a long time, so I'll post the winners soon and hope for smooth sailing!