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Ocean Breeze

loose tumbling sea breeze
sets waves of tense limbs free –
empty beach chairs


For SKAT's Picture Perfect 2 Contest

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David Meade

November 16, 2015 at 5:59 PM

I missed this one but glad I see it now. Cloudy and rainy here but I enjoyed the sea, sand and warm breeze. Sitting here visiting with you . . . "yes, family is fine . . . and yours . . . good!!"

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

November 16, 2015 at 8:40 PM

Yes, my family is fine. My days have been dark, and they are my God-given light. Without them...well, I don't like to think about it...glad to hear your family is good. I didn't know you had been away because I haven't been here in months myself. I'm trying to write again...looking for an escape. Thanks for the visit. It brings a smile to my face.

Samiha Zubair

October 2, 2015 at 9:15 AM

A maze of meanings expressed in few words

Samiha Zubair

October 2, 2015 at 9:16 AM

A difficult feat

Iris E. Sankey- Lewis

July 5, 2015 at 6:07 PM

Of course it's a win. Great imagination.

Paul Callus

June 26, 2015 at 8:08 AM

A delightful haiku, Rhonda; the image you present is perfect! Congrats on a fine win. hugs // paul

Andrea Dietrich

June 25, 2015 at 9:25 PM

big congrats, RHonda I wrote an etheree years ago with this same "idea" of the empty beach chairs. I really love that last line.

Richard Lamoureux

June 25, 2015 at 8:59 AM

Great mood! Congrats!

Shadow Hamilton

June 25, 2015 at 5:02 AM

congrats on placing Rhonda hugs

Skat A

June 25, 2015 at 1:28 AM

Rhonda... Congrats, thank you for the entry. The picture is done right! **SKAT**

Anne-Lise Andresen

June 23, 2015 at 5:01 AM

- Rhonda, a beautiful haiku ! - Good luck in contest ! - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Alexis Y.

June 21, 2015 at 1:11 AM

Rhonda, this a beautiful haiku. I love going to the beach. Great job. Good luck in the contest:)Alexis

Eileen Manassian

June 20, 2015 at 3:26 PM

Oh...I do love the beach, Rhonda. Hope to get some sun next week. Lovely haiku...Loved that first line....Hugs, dear.

Darlene Gifford

June 20, 2015 at 9:02 AM

A beautiful beach image. You put me there. My best to you in the contest.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 20, 2015 at 10:23 AM

Thanks, Darlene!

Arthur Vaso

June 20, 2015 at 1:05 AM

Are you inviting me? :)

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 20, 2015 at 10:25 AM

Anytime! It's a little hot right now on the Florida beaches, Arthur, but winters are beautiful. :) hugs

Andrea Dietrich

June 19, 2015 at 9:09 PM

oh YES, Now THAT is a picture perfect haiku

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 20, 2015 at 10:27 AM

Thanks, Andrea...I'm not sure what SKAT's looking for...I hope she likes it.

Frederic Parker

June 19, 2015 at 8:18 PM

tumbling sea breeze along with lightning will cause a lot of empty beach chairs..reminds me..what became of your florida contest?

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

June 19, 2015 at 8:30 PM

It's judged and ready to post...was waiting for calmer waters around here. I may be waiting a long time, so I'll post the winners soon and hope for smooth sailing!

Ocean Breeze

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