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A small house, a dim light, faint smells of stale prawns. I searched the ocean, boat with a broken mast, for the sounds which faded away, slowly into darkness. I was still, a wrinkled and torn shirt… and few moments of an uncommon and undeserved love. All was just a moment away, already stolen by my beer bottle and ashtray full of smoke. I heard her walk into me, into crowds of happiness, and also my lonely sorrows. Probably I kept on silently running in the forest, deeper and deeper into eternity.

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Date: 6/22/2013 11:17:00 AM
a search of broken mass... reminds me of many lighthouse stories.. love it... a very deep run into eternity. thank you for sharing... LUV~ Linda
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Date: 6/19/2013 7:15:00 PM
And the search continues ....... dark visual imagery that you use is awesome ........ looking for more lots of love-Shiraz
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Bidhu Patnaik
Date: 6/22/2013 3:44:00 AM
Thank You so much Shiraz.