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Nature haiku - Ocean, Lake Or River Poetry Contest

ocean

sparkles and shimmer
ocean dances under sun-
until clouds appear

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Anne-Lise Andresen

August 3, 2026 at 11:20 AM

- Lovely, Christine - Congratulations on your win in the contest, - hugs

Christine Watts

August 5, 2026 at 4:55 AM

Hi Anne-Lise Thank you hugs back

Sotto Poet

August 3, 2026 at 2:10 AM

Warm congratulations on your podium win, Christine, with this so beautiful and well-composed haiku.

Christine Watts

August 5, 2026 at 4:57 AM

Hi Sotto Thank you I enjoy Haiku, and have actually completed a Haiku writing class a few years ago Cheers Christine

Andrea Dietrich

August 2, 2026 at 7:04 PM

A lovely scene. Congrats, Christine

Tania Kitchin

August 2, 2026 at 2:43 PM

Christine, congratulations on your winning placement with your wonderful haiku with wonderful ocean imagery.

Christine Watts

August 2, 2026 at 5:58 PM

Hi Tania Thank you a reflection of watching the ocean in Bali last week Thanks for your selection most appreciative Cheers Christine

Andrea Dietrich

July 27, 2026 at 8:24 PM

I love the middle line. Ocean definitely dances when it's waves are sparkling

Christine Watts

July 29, 2026 at 7:55 AM

Hi Andrea Thanks and yes it sure does dance in the sun In Bali on holiday and watch the ocean shimmer and dance Cheers Chris

Alison A Smith nee Howarth

July 25, 2026 at 12:13 AM

Nice haiku

Christine Watts

July 29, 2026 at 7:53 AM

Hi Alison Many Thanks sorry about mix up with your name blame Bali brain Cheers Christine

Christine Watts

July 27, 2026 at 6:25 PM

Hi Karen Thank you I am in bali on holiday and this is what I see from my balcony Cheers Chrus

Karen Jones

July 24, 2026 at 10:04 PM

Nice imagery!

Christine Watts

July 25, 2026 at 6:18 PM

Hi Karen Thank you it is a reflection from me here in Bali on the balcony looking at the ocean and how the sea sparkles in the sunlight then dulls with the clouds I am enjoying the peaceful time Cheers Chris

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