Ocd

Obsessive workers in their seat 
An.al about documents neat
Choose never to rush
Or the toilet to flush  
Unless the paperwork's complete

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J.W. Earnings

Date: 11/14/2016 6:47:00 PM

Good one! (: This one probably describes many work lives nowadays. (: Nice to read this somewhat old poem by you! -JWE A 7 of o'course!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 11/14/2016 7:49:00 PM

Very kind of you to visit. The paperwork is very important in some of our jobs. Writing especially.

Hansteven Selfa

Date: 1/2/2016 6:31:00 AM

Great limerick!

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/17/2016 11:17:00 AM

Hansteven, glad you found this old one!

S. Nadia Azam Shah Bukhari

Date: 8/13/2013 9:51:00 AM

ha ha ha lovely and very funny lines. :D

Sara Kendrick

Date: 2/18/2013 6:16:00 AM

Cute one..OCD no that is not right let me get it right CDO...Ha!! OCD is not really funny though..I feel for anyone who has the illness..Thanks for the stops by my work..Soup Mail soon..Sara

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/17/2016 11:19:00 AM

Sara, I never replied to your comment (my bad). It is not funny--we are cursed who are obsessive about things. I don't know what it is that causes some of us to go over and over things from the past that were never resolved in a good way.

Debbie Duncan

Date: 1/9/2013 10:24:00 AM

nicely done Duke ;}

Duke Beaufort
Date: 1/17/2016 11:20:00 AM

Here is a late reply. We are who we are--and somethings just can't be changed. We can only temper the past by changing the way we deal with the similar circumstances in the present.

Terry O'Leary

Date: 1/5/2013 9:20:00 AM

Very nice limerick... and also funny (as they should be, but not everybody can always manage!)... Terry

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 1/4/2013 3:28:00 AM

Preoccupied with their work let life pass by and fluss them in the end. Enjoyed every word of it. How tru, how sad for them. Marvelous thought, excellent expression.

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/19/2012 10:01:00 AM

brilliant limerick this is, enjoyed...

Gwendolen Song

Date: 12/4/2012 7:38:00 PM

Great fun in this obsessive limerick!! Folks don't realize how difficult good limerick writing is...nice work. gwendolen

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/4/2012 4:30:00 PM

wow.. OCD... crazy to know nothing but work... i'd go crazy... no disorder out of me... .. thank you for sharing this awesome poem. Have yourself a good and wonderful day. Hope to read more of your poems tomorrow. take care~:-) LINDA

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/4/2012 8:03:00 AM

Yep, I know a few of THESE. I am a little OCD but not about WORK. hahaha. My mom is definitely OCD about work. This poem shows me that you know them very well.