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Obvious Flapping

obvious flapping struggling for a few seconds flowing with wind now following a cloud astonished forest watches eagle disappear

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Date: 5/13/2020 11:13:00 PM

'Astonished forest' - super personification within a Haiku! Great, Caren! :) gw

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/14/2020 1:21:00 AM

Thank you my friend.

Date: 5/12/2020 6:21:00 PM

They are regal!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/14/2020 1:21:00 AM

They truly are!

Date: 5/12/2020 5:15:00 PM

I really liked the finish with that second part!!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/14/2020 1:21:00 AM

I watch them all the time. It is really wonderful!

Date: 5/12/2020 3:54:00 AM

Love the image Caren Tom

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:21:00 PM

I love my eagles. They are all over here.

Date: 5/11/2020 2:41:00 PM

Oh, magnificent ku! Stellar ink dear poetess. xomo

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:41:00 PM

Thank you. My wild life keeps me so happy.

Date: 5/11/2020 1:13:00 PM

Nature is amazing! And you have a knack of capturing and immortalizing a moment in time. Great imagery!

Caren Krutsinger
Date: 5/12/2020 4:41:00 PM

Thank you my friend.