Obvious Flapping

obvious flapping
struggling for a few seconds
flowing with wind now

following a cloud
astonished forest watches
eagle disappear
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Wolf Avatar
May 13, 2020 at 11:13 PM
'Astonished forest' - super personification within a Haiku! Great, Caren! :) gw
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:21 AM
Thank you my friend.
Rodrigues Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 6:21 PM
They are regal!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:21 AM
They truly are!
Dietrich Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 5:15 PM
I really liked the finish with that second part!!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 14, 2020 at 1:21 AM
I watch them all the time. It is really wonderful!
Cunningham Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 3:54 AM
Love the image Caren Tom
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:21 PM
I love my eagles. They are all over here.
Pigeon Tart Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 2:41 PM
Oh, magnificent ku! Stellar ink dear poetess. xomo
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Thank you. My wild life keeps me so happy.
DiMino Avatar
May 11, 2020 at 1:13 PM
Nature is amazing! And you have a knack of capturing and immortalizing a moment in time. Great imagery!
Krutsinger Avatar
May 12, 2020 at 4:41 PM
Thank you my friend.
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