Obstacles

V1

Lost in a tunnel thats dark as can be 
surrounded with fear with out no one to help me 
your guidence is no use for me sence we are no longer a team
I thought we would be 2gether as one 
for many long years to come

            V2

No longer helpless honey now I see
Fear of what to love again all in do time that will happen
you asked me why we had to end as if you didn't do nothing 
But like I told you in the begining I'm not 1 of those girls who come
           2nd
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
October 24, 2009 at 9:17 AM
Nicely done. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
Brown Avatar
October 9, 2009 at 5:15 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Renee. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of love, fun and inspiration. Love, Carol
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