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Obstacles

V1 Lost in a tunnel thats dark as can be surrounded with fear with out no one to help me your guidence is no use for me sence we are no longer a team I thought we would be 2gether as one for many long years to come V2 No longer helpless honey now I see Fear of what to love again all in do time that will happen you asked me why we had to end as if you didn't do nothing But like I told you in the begining I'm not 1 of those girls who come 2nd

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Date: 10/24/2009 9:17:00 AM
Nicely done. Welcome to soup. Keep writing. Sara
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Date: 10/9/2009 5:15:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your awesome poetry today. Thank you Renee. I hope you have a wonderful weekend full of love, fun and inspiration. Love, Carol
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