Obsessive Compulsive Disorder

Every effort must pass through the peel like orange
the desired is the only way, there’s no range
and having a taste difficult to be bargained for any exchange
thus, anything other than perfection is mange.
Doing it right is limited, just doing becomes strange
giving a helping hand to keep things arranged
is like putting a spoilt urban model in a Grange.
such a soul is easily irritable but yet not ready to change.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2016

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February 9, 2016 at 6:44 PM
O.K. Funom, now I know why people tell me I have a compulsive disorder. But hey at least I can say my house is always clean and I know where everything is. Every nick nack has a place. Wonderful write!
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March 13, 2016 at 10:57 AM
hahahahahaha.... Don't worry Tammy! You are absolutely normal. Thanks for the visit
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