Obsession of Soaps

OBSESSION OF SOAPS

obsessed with the daylight hours
specifically the graven-image afternoon
like high place dungeon towers

calgon’s commercial didn’t “take me away”
but a clever string of soaps did the trick
yes ~ for three “wholesome” hours every day

like following a clever treasure map
i lived for “all my children”
Such lovely drivel and maple sap

for health’s sake visited “general hospital”
after all,  i have only “one life to live”
where i delved into the incredible and impossible:

clever tales, like candles in tunnels
where danger lurks, and romance,
with abundant pleasures, funnels

stories old as time itself ~
they were my sweet craving
on a lovely built in shelf

kept me sane until they drove me insane
a drip drip of sand through an hourglass
i envisioned myself with false teeth and a cane

only when my husband and kids
began to refer to them as “my soaps”
did i realize my life on the skids,

and like a potion i’d been pedaled
did i remove the suds from my eyes
in my lightbulb-brain, it was settled!

who wants to see a gravestone:
“HERE LIES MY SPOUSE WHO LIVED FOR HER SOAPS”

7/21/2017
Contest - Obsession

*True so many years ago. I don’t watch them anymore :)

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Date: 7/29/2017 5:13:00 PM
Loved this, Kim! When I was in prep school I'd get home in time to watch General Hospital and One Life to Live with my Sis as we did our homework, so I got hooked for a few years, then it was Dark Shadows! Great memories! Congrats, Kim! <3
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/29/2017 9:29:00 PM
I was a Dark Shadows fan also!! Thank you :)
Date: 7/27/2017 11:57:00 PM
Congratulations on your placement Kim, so well deserved....Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/28/2017 9:11:00 PM
Thank you Maria!
Date: 7/27/2017 7:11:00 AM
not a great obsession, Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2017 7:29:00 AM
Thanks Silent One! Indeed it was one to remove from my list :)
Date: 7/25/2017 8:43:00 AM
The Bold and the Beautiful, did you watch that? Kim I really enjoyed this cleverly crafted poem of yours. Made me laugh, I think we can all identify . Good luck in the contest...Maria
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/27/2017 7:30:00 AM
Thanks so much, Maria! A coworker was chuckling when she read it too. :)
Date: 7/21/2017 3:02:00 PM
Amazing, Kim, an obsession i had forgotten... My mom was so obsessed with them it was crazy... good write... luck in the contest... ~*
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thanks so much, Eve <3
Date: 7/21/2017 12:34:00 PM
Just so you know I read this a second time and decided it's so clever I just had to Fave it.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2017 9:37:00 PM
Thanks, Dale :)
Date: 7/21/2017 12:29:00 PM
Very funny, Kim. My grandmother(God rest her soul) Started out listening to them on the radio. When she finally got a TV she religiously watched "her stories" until she went blind. Then she would just sit and listen, as if she were listening to the radio again. Your poem made me think about her.
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2017 9:42:00 PM
Love your story, Daniel! :)
Date: 7/21/2017 11:29:00 AM
Oh this is awesome Kim! Giggles! Good luck in the contest! :)xomo
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Date: 7/21/2017 11:29:00 AM
Oh this is awesome Kim! Giggles! Good luck in the contest! :)xomo
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2017 9:44:00 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Date: 7/21/2017 10:50:00 AM
Magnificent! GL in the contest!
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Kim Rodrigues
Date: 7/21/2017 10:51:00 AM
Thanks so much, Dale!
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