Obsession of Soaps

OBSESSION OF SOAPS

obsessed with the daylight hours
specifically the graven-image afternoon
like high place dungeon towers

calgon’s commercial didn’t “take me away”
but a clever string of soaps did the trick
yes ~ for three “wholesome” hours every day

like following a clever treasure map
i lived for “all my children”
Such lovely drivel and maple sap

for health’s sake visited “general hospital”
after all,  i have only “one life to live”
where i delved into the incredible and impossible:

clever tales, like candles in tunnels
where danger lurks, and romance,
with abundant pleasures, funnels

stories old as time itself ~
they were my sweet craving
on a lovely built in shelf

kept me sane until they drove me insane
a drip drip of sand through an hourglass
i envisioned myself with false teeth and a cane

only when my husband and kids
began to refer to them as “my soaps”
did i realize my life on the skids,

and like a potion i’d been pedaled
did i remove the suds from my eyes
in my lightbulb-brain, it was settled!

who wants to see a gravestone:
“HERE LIES MY SPOUSE WHO LIVED FOR HER SOAPS”

7/21/2017
Contest - Obsession

*True so many years ago. I don’t watch them anymore :)
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July 29, 2017 at 5:13 PM
Loved this, Kim! When I was in prep school I'd get home in time to watch General Hospital and One Life to Live with my Sis as we did our homework, so I got hooked for a few years, then it was Dark Shadows! Great memories! Congrats, Kim! <3
Rodrigues Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 9:29 PM
I was a Dark Shadows fan also!! Thank you :)
Williams Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 11:57 PM
Congratulations on your placement Kim, so well deserved....Maria
Rodrigues Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 9:11 PM
Thank you Maria!
One Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:11 AM
not a great obsession, Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:29 AM
Thanks Silent One! Indeed it was one to remove from my list :)
Williams Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 8:43 AM
The Bold and the Beautiful, did you watch that? Kim I really enjoyed this cleverly crafted poem of yours. Made me laugh, I think we can all identify . Good luck in the contest...Maria
Rodrigues Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 7:30 AM
Thanks so much, Maria! A coworker was chuckling when she read it too. :)
Roper Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 3:02 PM
Amazing, Kim, an obsession i had forgotten... My mom was so obsessed with them it was crazy... good write... luck in the contest... ~*
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Thanks so much, Eve <3
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 12:34 PM
Just so you know I read this a second time and decided it's so clever I just had to Fave it.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:37 PM
Thanks, Dale :)
Turner Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 12:29 PM
Very funny, Kim. My grandmother(God rest her soul) Started out listening to them on the radio. When she finally got a TV she religiously watched "her stories" until she went blind. Then she would just sit and listen, as if she were listening to the radio again. Your poem made me think about her.
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:42 PM
Love your story, Daniel! :)
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Oh this is awesome Kim! Giggles! Good luck in the contest! :)xomo
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 9:44 PM
Thanks so much, Maureen!
Pigeon Tart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 11:29 AM
Oh this is awesome Kim! Giggles! Good luck in the contest! :)xomo
Cozart Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 10:50 AM
Magnificent! GL in the contest!
Rodrigues Avatar
July 21, 2017 at 10:51 AM
Thanks so much, Dale!
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