Obsession For Perfection


My obsession for perfection drives me crazy 
When I wash dishes
not a single dot of dirt is acceptable to me 
When I teach my son every word in chapter
I must understand thoroughly 
This goes with every job I do 
It makes me slow
I have no free time in hand 
I wish I were not like this!

There are many who are not perfect 
They are living healthy and happy 

Is perfection good or bad?
Are we not made up of dust ?
Will be we not mingle with it?
Is not everything temporary ?
Why not take things lightly ?
These questions I ask 

Along with my nature and confusion
Life goes on...

March 21, 2021
Inspired by My Obsession contest of Regina McIntosh
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Stathakis Avatar
April 12, 2021 at 3:29 PM
I love your questioning in your poem, especially the line, "Is perfection good or bad?" I believe that it is through questioning that some clarity is possible. Congrats.
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 13, 2021 at 7:02 PM
Thanks George. Take care! God bless! Rama
Goldsmith Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:57 AM
Congratulations on your win. A wonderful write. Love your line, "Is not everything temporary ?" Yes, it is. Have a blessed day/weekend....................
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thanks Paula. Take care, God bless! Rama
Mcintosh Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 7:35 AM
Wonderful writing. God bless you and congrats on your win. Love, Gina
Balasubramanian Avatar
April 10, 2021 at 8:16 AM
Thanks for the placement. It is an honour to be placed amongst top 15. Take care, God bless! Love, Rama
Ray Choudhury Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 6:44 PM
Hi Rama, your poem resonates with me very much. Thanks for sharing. GL in the contest ~ Mala
Balasubramanian Avatar
March 26, 2021 at 8:22 PM
Thanks. There are many like us.
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