Obsession

Obsession in the sky above, such infinite beauty I truly love Beyond the earth I see Mother Moon and stars and planets too Saturn and Jupiter through my scope sends shivers to my spine Even Saturn’s rings I see clearly and Jupiter’s many moons Shiniest planet, favourite by far, is sparkling, glistening Venus She really is the jewel in the crown, this diamond way up high ISS is another treat and I always wave as she passes me by Oh lucky me having balconies high, so much closer to the sky Now seeing an exquisite sunset, brings tears of joy into my eyes Written 23rd September 2021 Contest 'O' contest new poems Sponsor Constance La France 2nd Place

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Line Gauthier

Date: 10/15/2021 8:59:00 AM

Beautiful poem, Ann ~ you are indeed the celestial queen.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/18/2021 10:29:00 PM

haha... thank you dearest Line xx

Constance La France

Date: 10/5/2021 7:58:00 AM

Ann, congratulations on your win in my "O" contest with this wonderfully penned poem, well done ~ love and serenity _Constance

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/12/2021 4:03:00 AM

Many thanks Constance for my win in your contest. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Sam Kauffman

Date: 9/28/2021 10:21:00 AM

What a lovely "planetary" gem, Ann. I love the line about the balcony letting you be closer to this wonderful universe of ours. And the acrostic was a perfect form for highlighting each planet. Congratulations on your win my friend! Your words bring wonder and joy to the night sky.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/1/2021 4:27:00 PM

awww Sam I really appreciate your lovely words my friend. Each time I look up at the night sky it brings me wonder and joy, so I am delighted that I was able to capture that within my poem. With kindest thoughts Ann xx

Christuraj Alex

Date: 9/24/2021 10:55:00 PM

Beautiful writing. Congratulations!

Ann Gilmour
Date: 10/1/2021 4:24:00 PM

thank you dear Christuraj... with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/23/2021 12:49:00 PM

So you know the planetary system well. Lovely poem.

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/23/2021 12:54:00 PM

Ha yes I think I do, I spend more time looking skywards than anywhere else for it is so magical. This morning there was a most beautiful sunrise and on Tuesday there was a stunning Harvest moon - truly wonderful. Thank you Victor with kindest thoughts Ann xx

Jan Allison

Date: 9/23/2021 12:14:00 PM

I too love looking at the night sky, so beautifully penned:-) hugs jan Soupmail xx

Ann Gilmour
Date: 9/23/2021 12:36:00 PM

Aww bless you Jan and thank you ~ with love and hugs Ann xx