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Obsessed, Am I Going To See Another Day

Yes, I'm obsessed, blessed,to be woken by the sunshine peeking in my window, touching my face as I lie in bed, it tells me, "Good morning sleepyhead, time to start the day." With happiness of life still running through my veins, aches and pains, I smile knowing I am still alive. I sit up on my own, old and gray, and touch the cold floor beneath my bare feet and stay, I stretch my arms and legs, and then I pray, "Thank you Lord for another day." , then I dress. Opening the door, I step outside into the world, and breathe the mirth of greeting nature's lullabies, pleasant fragrance of dewy garden wreaths, and silent lawn beneath the shade of trees. I gaze up to the pale blue sky, and watch a flock of birds fly across, while a wisp of clouds meander by. Watch the breeze flow, running its tendrils through the golden field at bay leaving a wave of ripples along the way, spiraling around anything that stands wanting to play. As the sun slowly goes to rest, the moon takes his place. I sit on the front porch in my old rocking chair, wrapped warm from the cool night air, and watch the trembling stars. It all worms its way into my heart, from dawn until dusk bringing a warmhearted smile. I am blessed, to face another day
I do obsess if I'm going to see another day 7/22/2017
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Michael Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 8:30 PM
Enjoyed reading...Lucky you...Have a good night Eve
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much, Arturo:) ~*
Barden Avatar
July 29, 2017 at 5:07 PM
I really enjoyed this, Eve, the writing and the subject ... a well-deserved placement - congratulations! :-)
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 9:07 PM
Thank you so much, Greg :) ~*
Williams Avatar
July 28, 2017 at 12:12 AM
Congratulations Eve on your placement, so well deserved....Maria xx
Roper Avatar
August 5, 2017 at 9:08 PM
Thank you so much,Maria :) ~*
One Avatar
July 27, 2017 at 6:22 AM
Live life like it is the last moment, an interesting choice for the contest Eve.. Very well written.. Congratulations on your placement in he contest..
Nusker Avatar
July 26, 2017 at 1:17 PM
A very lovely poem with great imagery, Eve.
Marcum Wong Avatar
July 25, 2017 at 1:25 AM
To love life is to share that joy with others as you have accomplished in this lovely poem Eve! : )
Shaw Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 11:28 PM
Yes - I am a true believer in not wasting one day we are given - this is a lovely poem that depicts it all from morning to night - very heart warming - and how lucky am I to havefound an already favorite of your poems so soon - lovely - Indiana x x x
Gupta Avatar
July 24, 2017 at 9:12 AM
Lovely ... Very well written, Eve ... The last four lines are inspiring ...
Trifiatis Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 10:06 AM
If only we all had such an obsession we would better people have become! Marvelously done my dear Eve! It has talked into my heart for there was a period like that in my life that the next morning was a remote possibility. The thanksgiving though lasts to this day and will go on! Thank you!
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:27 PM
Thank you dear friend for the compliment, life is to short to take advantage of and not enjoy.. ~*
Flats Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:54 AM
Loverly. I particularly like the verse about the breeze "spiraling around anything that stands wanting to play" Every night when I crawl into bed I remind myself that today was the second best day ever — the best is yet to come. Cheers 'n hugs ~ john
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:28 PM
Thank you, John, yes the best is yet to come ....~*
Williams Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 4:09 AM
Eve such a beautiful spiritual poem of yours here which I thoroughly enjoyed. What beautiful lines capturing the everyday scenes which others might take for granted, you have witnessed beauty. Looking through the eyes of Love one would say. If this is for the contest, I wish you luck , which I dont think you need...Maria
Roper Avatar
July 23, 2017 at 9:30 PM
Thank you, Maria, people take for granted the gift that has been given to us to enjoy, not until it is to late do the realize how precious the days are ....~*
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