Obsesion

OBSESION They say an obsession Is not good for oneself I beg to differ, If Its an obsession for health If you want to succeed To be healthy and strong Be obsessed by your vision You will never go wrong!!!

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Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/16/2010 2:57:00 AM

Healt seem to be a good obsesion,, one should think of..Thriving on being healthy. enjoyed,..p.d.

Billy Thekidster

Date: 1/23/2010 5:21:00 PM

Your poetry reads like a melodious song. All I can say is Keep Writing On! Great write as usual, my friend Simone. It's now past my bedtime. Goodnight (Yawn). Best Wishes Always, Bill

Bryan Bolton

Date: 12/18/2009 8:55:00 AM

right= I like this, I like the fact that your poems challenge convention Write On !!!!!

K K Iloduba Jnr

Date: 11/25/2009 4:11:00 AM

Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Sarah Johnson

Date: 11/20/2009 7:31:00 AM

keep writing this is a very good poem

Dean Masciarelli

Date: 11/2/2009 7:24:00 AM

Hi Simone I have come back again to enjoy my coffee and another wonderful poem, and I am never surprised,because I know when I get done reading one of them that I can walk out my door and enjoy another beautiful day that is filled with inspiration,Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift in poetry with all of us here in the poetry community,Have a fantastic day or night,Dean

James Fraser

Date: 10/27/2009 1:03:00 PM

Kool poem Simone >> James

Sara Kendrick

Date: 10/26/2009 7:18:00 AM

Well anything can be carried to far but good ideas here. Keep writing. Sara