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Obsesion

OBSESION

They say an obsession

Is not good for oneself

I beg to differ,

If Its an obsession for health

If you want to succeed

To be healthy and strong

Be obsessed by your vision

You will never go wrong!!!

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Poet Destroyer A Date: 7/16/2010 2:57:00 AM Healt seem to be a good obsesion,, one should think of..Thriving on being healthy. enjoyed,..p.d. Login to Reply

Billy Thekidster Date: 1/23/2010 5:21:00 PM Your poetry reads like a melodious song. All I can say is Keep Writing On! Great write as usual, my friend Simone. It's now past my bedtime. Goodnight (Yawn). Best Wishes Always, Bill Login to Reply

Bryan Bolton Date: 12/18/2009 8:55:00 AM right= I like this, I like the fact that your poems challenge convention Write On !!!!! Login to Reply

K K Iloduba Jnr Date: 11/25/2009 4:11:00 AM Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh! Login to Reply

Sarah Johnson Date: 11/20/2009 7:31:00 AM keep writing this is a very good poem Login to Reply

Dean Masciarelli Date: 11/2/2009 7:24:00 AM Hi Simone I have come back again to enjoy my coffee and another wonderful poem, and I am never surprised,because I know when I get done reading one of them that I can walk out my door and enjoy another beautiful day that is filled with inspiration,Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift in poetry with all of us here in the poetry community,Have a fantastic day or night,Dean Login to Reply

James Fraser Date: 10/27/2009 1:03:00 PM Kool poem Simone >> James Login to Reply

Sara Kendrick Date: 10/26/2009 7:18:00 AM Well anything can be carried to far but good ideas here. Keep writing. Sara Login to Reply