Obsesion

OBSESION

They say an obsession

Is not good for oneself

I beg to differ,

If Its an obsession for health

If you want to succeed

To be healthy and strong

Be obsessed by your vision

You will never go wrong!!!

inspirationalrhyme

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Poet Destroyer A

July 16, 2010 at 2:57 AM

Healt seem to be a good obsesion,, one should think of..Thriving on being healthy. enjoyed,..p.d.

Billy Thekidster

January 23, 2010 at 5:21 PM

Your poetry reads like a melodious song. All I can say is Keep Writing On! Great write as usual, my friend Simone. It's now past my bedtime. Goodnight (Yawn). Best Wishes Always, Bill

Bryan Bolton

December 18, 2009 at 8:55 AM

right= I like this, I like the fact that your poems challenge convention Write On !!!!!

K K Iloduba Jnr

November 25, 2009 at 4:11 AM

Mhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!

Sarah Johnson

November 20, 2009 at 7:31 AM

keep writing this is a very good poem

Dean Masciarelli

November 2, 2009 at 7:24 AM

Hi Simone I have come back again to enjoy my coffee and another wonderful poem, and I am never surprised,because I know when I get done reading one of them that I can walk out my door and enjoy another beautiful day that is filled with inspiration,Thank you for sharing your wonderful gift in poetry with all of us here in the poetry community,Have a fantastic day or night,Dean