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Observing the Koi

A koi pond brings meditation into vogue She slows your heartbeats as you become one With the gorgeous gold and black fish One of the few you are not tempted to eat or are you?

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Date: 3/11/2022 10:05:00 AM
Oh no! Never. The koi are so beautiful and graceful and add so much to a pond. They don't ever eat them in Japan, do they???
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:07:00 AM
I imagine they do. Slurp. Slurp. Chomp. Chomp.
Date: 3/11/2022 9:08:00 AM
LOL~indeed I do not want to eat it ~strictly used for meditative purposes! :)Paulette
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:07:00 AM
I love watching them swim but think they might be tasty too.
Date: 3/11/2022 4:27:00 AM
Well Caren, with the price of fish what it is...well maybe not, I have always been a sucker or the "Koi" and the beautiful....
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Caren Krutsinger
Date: 3/12/2022 5:07:00 AM
I have too John! Me too!

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