Observed

You micro manage our performance
Like germs under a microscope
Always watching probing controlling
We are never free but nor are you
All of us are observed from afar
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De Beaulieu Avatar
January 29, 2020 at 2:21 PM
Hello Nick Armbrister Jimmy BoomSemtex, so nice to meet you. I happen to believe that is true. Have a nice day my friend.
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January 30, 2020 at 1:34 PM
Hello Nick Armbrister Jimmy, I do understand this poem better. Also you have explained it well. Have a nce day my friend.
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January 29, 2020 at 10:02 PM
thanx Darlene just like my latest poem see this to compare my friend. Differences Here Bigger than blackness More massive than space Hiding more than infinity This is what we faced A thing that was itself unknown How do you deal with this? Something you don't understand? But try to understand By learning and studying Like a student in a classroom Just as it surely studied us This thing from afar That was everything All things included even us Were we one and the same Or completely different? We built rocket ships and space stations It needed no vehicle nor body For it was pure energy Coming from elsewhere We would understand And prevail in the end Like the thing did
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