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Observe, deep laugh lines run Obligingly around Obedient to years Of smiles upon her face. Overlook her awful Obviously painful Ongoing constant throe Date: 04/04/2021 Contest: Pleiades O Sponsor: Kim Merryman

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Janice Canerdy

Date: 4/10/2021 10:52:00 AM

Very moving and well done, Sara. CONGRATS on your win. Janice

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2021 1:18:00 PM

Janice, Thanks for the nice comment. I appreciate you dropping by with congrats. Sara

Howard Kerr

Date: 4/10/2021 3:55:00 AM

Sara, this work is beyond special in my eyes. Well done. Thanks for complimenting my entry. Howard

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2021 4:30:00 AM

Howard, Thanks for dropping by and giving my work such a kind review. Sara

Unseeking Seeker

Date: 4/9/2021 7:25:00 PM

Wow Sara! A beautiful Pleiades, with never say die, mood elevating message! Congrats on your win! Contests are difficult to judge, reflecting what resonates with the sponsor; I readily admit to this flaw myself! Have a great day!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/10/2021 4:24:00 AM

US, Yes, the contest winner/winners depends on what the sponsor thinks and no one else. I have to decide what to do on each one I do. I usually only eliminate the ones which do not follow the rules that I asked then decide what to do with what is left. I know every poem has its good points and deserves notice. Thanks for dropping by my page. Sara

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/7/2021 3:08:00 PM

Nicely done, Sara. In her blog I think she tells how she left out the complete rules for this form. Otherwise, I bet this would have scored higher!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2021 4:14:00 PM

Andrea, Well, it is seven line and 6 syllables plus it is all about observe so I guess it follows the rules. It is not about a name of a person either. I guess it was her choice to place it lower. Sometimes the judge likes what is said or not. It is always up to them. I try not to let it bother me anymore. I just write something and try to do it correctly then let it go. Thanks for dropping by. Sara

Kim Merryman

Date: 4/7/2021 2:10:00 PM

Sara, congrats on your win in my contest with your observant pleaides! Blessings, Kim M

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2021 4:11:00 PM

Kim, Thanks for dropping by to let me know that I placed in your contest. Sara

Eve Roper

Date: 4/6/2021 10:29:00 PM

Great write, Sara, congratulations on your Pleiades win. The picture and verse is how I feel. Eve

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2021 4:03:00 PM

Eve, Thanks for dropping by with your kind review. Sara

Judy Ball

Date: 4/5/2021 5:49:00 PM

Nicely done Sara and the Pic is a perfect match. Good luck in the contest . Well done. God Bless, JB

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/7/2021 6:08:00 AM

Judy, Thanks for your best wishes. Your kind review is uplifting. Sara

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 4/5/2021 7:46:00 AM

Loved your pleiad. You composed it in a masterful way.

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/5/2021 2:43:00 PM

Victor, Thanks for the kind review of my work. Sara

Alexis Y.

Date: 4/4/2021 1:48:00 PM

Hi Sara, You penned a Pleiades with letter O. Best wishes in the contest. Have a great day:-) Alexis

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2021 1:55:00 PM

Alexis, Yes and she is saying oh! too much of the time now. Thanks for the visit to my page. Sara

Ann Foster

Date: 4/4/2021 11:05:00 AM

So sad, so true. Great write. Ann

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2021 1:44:00 PM

Ann, Yes, there is truth in aging is not for sissies. Encouraging me is your presence at my page. Sara

Heidi Sands

Date: 4/4/2021 10:16:00 AM

I have seen many good ones today, written in this challenging form. This is so good too. Well done :)

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2021 1:43:00 PM

Heidi, I had noticed several on here but did not know there was a contest until I looked this morning. I thought I would try. I am delighted that you dropped by. Sara

L Milton Hankins

Date: 4/4/2021 9:26:00 AM

Ah, such a fine job with this Pleiades form, Sara. Reminds me of me!

Sara Kendrick
Date: 4/4/2021 1:42:00 PM

Milton, Age takes its toll on most everyone. If not in one way then in another one. Your presence at my page is encouraging. Sara