Observations An Open Form

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NOTE::THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' (intuitive cadence)& so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the mom

OBSERVATIONS
a dream
 of truth
  deserving
  enthusiasm
in
never-to-be- forgotten
  expectations

 predictions
 adornments
 engravings
with
compositions
reiterating
 appropriate
images
  alongside
 continuity
of
 viewpoints

divisive
diminished
 prospects
 destabilise
stability
&
  benefit
the
 sympathetic

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