Observations

It's like my life's on probation
Trapped in ah broken nation
Ghetto's of damnation
Got home feeling like incarceration
Dreams of liberation
Leave every black man, woman, and 
child mind full of contemplation
Opposing my opposition with a 
tattooed disposition 
It's not to many good times in the 
position
I may have your attention 
Listen Listen Listen
Confession booths are the partition
That hide the evil in religion
Lost souls can't see the doom in 
man's division
Asking for restitution
Stop
Spark a revolution
That's the solution

T.B.T
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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February 14, 2014 at 11:37 PM
What ever it is I think your first poem on this site is great. Ronald, . Happy valentines, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. You will enjoy the community, we are one big happy family. (Drama & Love. LOL) ~ Take Care!! From: your new poet friend @-> LINDA <-@
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February 15, 2014 at 11:07 AM
Linda, I really appreciate the warm welcome & Valentine's Day wish. I hope you enjoyed yesterday as well... I'm really enjoying the site. Trying to fit more time in the schedule to read more pieces from other members! I'll definitely be reading your pieces soon...
Jones Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 5:28 PM
Ronald this had my attention from the first word...would love to hear you perform this live..awesome job..
Johnson Avatar
February 11, 2014 at 5:29 PM
Thanks Donna I really appreciate it! No it's not a song. I'm thinking of putting together a video of me reciting this and a few other pieces. I will be sure to share the link with you when that happens!
Jones Avatar
February 10, 2014 at 5:29 PM
PS...or recite..if its not a song..:-) :-) :-)
Johnson Avatar
February 4, 2014 at 6:21 PM
I thank you both for your appreciation & warm welcome!!!
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February 4, 2014 at 4:21 AM
- Warm welcome to PoetrySoup,Ronald- I choose your first good written poem - hope you will write many more in the future :) - Hope you will be satisfied with our "soup family" - we are many .. but has plenty of room for you too- PoetrySoup Rule1: Be kind and keep PoetrySoup a haven. PoetrySoup is a drama free zone(Comment on the poetry of others and they will comment on yours.) Thank you posted your words and thoughts here, I want to come back to read more another day. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)
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February 3, 2014 at 6:19 PM
Ronald, wow! wow. . Your first poem on the soup is a knock out!! Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best when it comes to your poems. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here. Starting with me. SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you like. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND". Hugs* SKAT"
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