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Observation At Three

a house is good when it is night; turn on the light and the darkness won't come in

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Deb M

Date: 2/5/2023 8:58:00 PM

The simplicity and innocence of a young child is the most precious thing ever!! Sweet as Elizabeth….Debx

Michael Tor

Date: 2/3/2023 12:37:00 PM

Light makes our surroundings more enjoyable, and darkness I always associate with apprehension. Thanks for sharing.

Shirley Hawkins

Date: 1/29/2023 3:36:00 PM

MAGIC!

Timothy Ray

Date: 1/16/2023 3:41:00 PM

simple and gravid with life's lumination along the path....as the Stoics teach...lead a virtuous life and whatever follows will take care of itself

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 1/16/2023 4:25:00 PM

So true and more difficult than it sounds. If wishes were horses, beggars would ride... Elizabeth

Joe Dimino

Date: 1/15/2023 6:00:00 AM

Love it! So true, surround ourselves with Light. Great advise.

Joe Maverick

Date: 1/15/2023 12:07:00 AM

Yes we need the inner light also Elizabeth Moreso indeed' I wish yours will burn bright In these times of manufacured darkness To keep your way, unto the day.'

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 1/15/2023 2:23:00 AM

I always feel you are looking with night-adapted eyes. That is interesting1 Elizabeth

FJ Thomas

Date: 1/14/2023 9:01:00 AM

This can be true in more than one sense, my inner darkness comes mostly at night... memories I run from. Love when short ones are multifaceted! Wonderful Elizabeth

Elizabeth Mccann
Date: 1/14/2023 1:45:00 PM

And I love it when a reader sees another facet!! Thank you very much, FJ! Elizabeth