Observation

The pin oak and silver maple trees
In the woodland across the way
Shift like shutters in the breeze,
I love to sit and watch them sway.

written June 21, 2021
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Boles Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 1:11 AM
I love the way you succinctly described this beautiful scenery in four lines Milton! Great! Thanks for sharing...ab
Hankins Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Thanks so much, AB.
Bangalee Avatar
June 21, 2021 at 9:43 PM
beautiful imagery observation~
Hankins Avatar
June 22, 2021 at 8:03 AM
Thanks, Mahtab. Good to hear from you.
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