Obscurities

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Owl Grass Mouse Predator And - Free photo on Pixabay

*Image of Owl Grass Mouse Predator by Pixabay. obscurities darkness blinks afar inert rug fronds made alive plumes confuse stillness 2021 October 15

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Michelle Faulkner

Date: 10/15/2021 11:42:00 PM

Richly evocative, love the dark night beauty-

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/16/2021 1:19:00 AM

Michelle, your perspective qualities are admirable my friend, Aloha!

Sotto Poet

Date: 10/15/2021 6:44:00 PM

As always, a well-written Haiku, full of imagery in immaculate wording.

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/15/2021 7:51:00 PM

Lasaad, your astute senses expose its innate nature my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu

Date: 10/15/2021 3:50:00 PM

Hello William Kekaula, strange things happen in the darkness. Aloha! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu
Date: 10/16/2021 6:01:00 AM

Hello William yes the light does shine in darkness it just has to be searched for the light. Aloha! Darlene

Hilo Poet
Date: 10/15/2021 6:07:00 PM

True, Darlene, the light does shine truly my friend, Aloha!