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Obscurities

*Image of Owl Grass Mouse Predator by Pixabay.

obscurities
darkness blinks afar
inert rug fronds made alive
plumes confuse stillness

2021 October 15

Copyright © William Kelii Kekaula | Year Posted 2021

birdnaturehaiku

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Michelle Faulkner

October 15, 2021 at 11:42 PM

Richly evocative, love the dark night beauty-

William Kelii Kekaula

October 16, 2021 at 1:19 AM

Michelle, your perspective qualities are admirable my friend, Aloha!

October 15, 2021 at 6:44 PM

As always, a well-written Haiku, full of imagery in immaculate wording.

William Kelii Kekaula

October 15, 2021 at 7:51 PM

Lasaad, your astute senses expose its innate nature my friend, Aloha!

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 15, 2021 at 3:50 PM

Hello William Kekaula, strange things happen in the darkness. Aloha! Darlene

Darlene De Beaulieu

October 16, 2021 at 6:01 AM

Hello William yes the light does shine in darkness it just has to be searched for the light. Aloha! Darlene

William Kelii Kekaula

October 15, 2021 at 6:07 PM

True, Darlene, the light does shine truly my friend, Aloha!

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