Obscuring Mist

Mystic presence I feel! this makes me shiver!
Its magnetic aura makes me aware, 
suddenly I feel restless I cannot bare!

Mist
the feeling makes me lay down
biting my lips 
I hear my heart beats 
and a rush of red on my cheeks

Smelled my scent
Sweet
soft
obscure scent... and the sudden feeling of obscuring mist! 

Then I have you 
smelled a breath.
A trace of the mist on my lips.
An invisible, warm and gentle kiss! 

The touch outlining my legs 
makes them half apart
And I tasted it...
I cried! 

Damn, obscuring mist!

Inner Whispers

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Date: March 7, 2014
Free Verse
5th Place win
Contest : 
Danger by
Sheri Fresonke Harper
Date: 3/26/2014 11:25:00 AM
"You capture the quality of misty moments, Inner Whispers, very lovely. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest, sorry for the delay in telling you so."
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March 29, 2014 at 4:50 PM
INNER, CONGRATS ON YOUR WIN..... Awesome poem!! Luv ~SKAT~
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March 29, 2014 at 8:19 PM
thanks SKAT! This is my first win here...and i will treasure this chance!
Harper Avatar
March 26, 2014 at 11:25 AM
You capture the quality of misty moments, Inner Whispers, very lovely. Congratulations on your win. Thanks for entering my contest, sorry for the delay in telling you so.
Whispers Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 4:44 AM
Hello Maam Sheri! Wow...i am awed! Thank you for giving me the chance and believing on myself! This win made me jump with joy! Haha! Thank you, Maam!
Mehta Avatar
March 22, 2014 at 10:22 PM
Very clever creation, Congrats on the fine win, inner
Whispers Avatar
March 27, 2014 at 4:42 AM
wow! this really won? Thanks Dr. Ram! I am thrilled!
Callus Avatar
March 7, 2014 at 12:39 PM
sensual...very well written. // paul
Whispers Avatar
March 9, 2014 at 11:57 PM
Thanks, Paul Callus
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