Obnubilated Sky

Myriad of stars
                                                In obnubilated sky
                                              Coalesces the charm
                                              With incipient rapture
                                             Enthralling a great story














3-16-2016
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A   Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:57 AM
Thanks for the reply, Nayda....pd
Onclaud Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 10:11 AM
vivid imagination and a greeat read, dear nayda... huggs
Negron Flores Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Nette
A   Avatar
March 17, 2016 at 11:28 PM
I like the first line a lot. Myriad of stars... Enjoyed Nayda. LINDA
Negron Flores Avatar
March 18, 2016 at 11:40 AM
Thank you Linda
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