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Openly opinionated Blunt with few social skills Nobody likes a know it all Overbearing and rude Xanthippe – this speaks for itself! Ignorant of the feelings of others Often wrong but you will never admit it Unwilling to listen to advice So full of your own importance Why do you treat people so badly? Other people’s opinions matter Maybe you should take a good look at yourself All people deserve to be treated with respect NEVER cross my path again 25th July 2015

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Eve Roper

Date: 7/28/2015 8:18:00 AM

You just know what to say when it comes to life. This one hit home, I wish they would stay out of my life. Hugs Eve

Jan Allison
Date: 7/28/2015 9:10:00 AM

and mine too:-( hugs Jan xx

Olive Eloisa Guillermo - Fraser

Date: 7/27/2015 9:25:00 AM

Jan, straightforward and hits hard!!! ~Olive Eloisa =')

Jan Allison
Date: 7/27/2015 9:47:00 AM

Thanks Olive:-) hugs jan xx

Njeri Hunjeri

Date: 7/26/2015 3:44:00 AM

very well expressed. ive seen this kind of woman.

Rachel Preston
Date: 7/27/2015 3:41:00 PM

i've seen her too and had the 'pleasure' of her company in hospital....aaarrrgghh i'll be posting about her very soon look out for it!! Well done Jan another excellent poem xx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 5:56:00 AM

Not nice are they Njeri! Hugs jan xx

Lindsay Laurie

Date: 7/25/2015 8:08:00 PM

G'day Jan... I couldn't help seeing faces running through my head as I read this poem Jan, but they were the faces of certain politicians - thank you Jan; a nice rant - Lindsay

Jan Allison
Date: 7/26/2015 5:55:00 AM

It's nice to have a rant Lindsay - I am sure there are people we can all relate this poem too:-) hugs jan xx

Kp Nunez

Date: 7/25/2015 3:04:00 PM

Here, finally. Was over at the contest results page but finally gave up for another day.... Saw this earlier when I was out. Some great acrostic. Jan. Very effective. Even after 3 weeks...hugs! :-)

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 3:08:00 PM

Too many contests closing and not enough time to read - am so glad you dropped by Kim - been a long time coming but finally time to post this lol:-) This proves I can't write nicey nicey all the time lol:-) hugs jan xx

James Fraser

Date: 7/25/2015 1:21:00 PM

I love these hard hitting writes. Not being here as much as I'd like to be, I'm missing out :( but does my instinct tell me? All the same, nice writing irrespective of the reason for the write. Hugs always Jan :)xx 2 weeks until my arms get sore flying to happiness, James xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 1:35:00 PM

aww James - seems we are both into the powerful hard hitting writes at the moment - i started this before my muse went on a 2 week holiday - i never ditch my initial ideas - keep them in a pending pile lol. I bet you can't wait - not flapping those wings early my friend lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/25/2015 11:08:00 AM

I liked Ian's comment below, but he is not a woman. hahaha. Yep, some people just never learn. Glad to see you finally finished this one, Jan!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 12:58:00 PM

Yes that made me giggle - of course he can be an honorary woman if he feels it would fit the bill lol:-) I wrote the first part before my muse went on holiday lol its been sitting in my pending pile till now lol:-) hugs Jan xx

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/25/2015 9:49:00 AM

there is something called basic social manners... sadly, she's lacking in such... not worth your while.. huggs

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 12:55:00 PM

Sadly people don't always see themselves as other's see them Nette:-( hugs Jan xx

Judy Konos

Date: 7/25/2015 8:44:00 AM

Sounds like when you get around her you lose brain cells!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:50:00 AM

LOL Judy today is my day off - I have only one braincell left and I share that with someone :-) hugs Jan xx

Tim Smith

Date: 7/25/2015 8:24:00 AM

Unfortunately there are people who thrive on trying to knock others down. Jealousy can do this. Ignore them....have a great weekend... I'm out of town til Tuesday checking out Universities.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:40:00 AM

Tim he is so so driven - he has split his studies between Chicago and Cambridge - he will got far! Hugs jan xx

Tim Smith
Date: 7/25/2015 8:37:00 AM

U of Chicago is a top notch university... Real cutting edge in their cancer research. His parents should be proud only the too of the top get in there.

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:31:00 AM

Yes its a sad fact of life Tim:-( My friend's son has recently got a job in Chicago at the University - oh boy he has worked so hard to achieve his dream:-) hugs Jan xx

Casarah Nance

Date: 7/25/2015 8:07:00 AM

Hugs. Sending positivity. xxx

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:28:00 AM

Thanks Cas I am sure there are many who can relate to this to some degree! Hugs jan xx

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 7/25/2015 7:26:00 AM

Female Zeus releasing her thunderbolts of furry over those who commit hubris! Outstanding dear, Jan! a seven for the lesson on Ethics!

Jan Allison
Date: 7/25/2015 8:22:00 AM

Thanks Demetrios - I just needed an out let and this was the result - no harm in venting from time to time:-) hugs jan xx