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Obnoxious Boors

Excuse me, please, if I am not impressed By the unnecessary barb shot at another, By plain rudeness and blatant snarkiness Especially aimed at my sister or brother. I’m totally turned off by a nasty attitude Or overbearing and narcissistic behavior, On the other hand, I’m all for pulchritude. Yeah, I like beauty in all forms and flavors. Then, those people who feel entitled, Living off the largesse they did not earn Whose arrogance goes about unbridled I doubt those ne’er-do-wells will ever learn. Yep, these folks, they simply turn me off I don’t care to be around their kind, I know, I know, some of them will scoff But, as for me, they won’t change my mind. Written June 1, 2022

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Jan Allison

Date: 6/2/2022 11:32:00 AM

bravo for shouting out and taking a stand Milton:-) WRITE ON! xx

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 11:34:00 AM

Every now and then I just have to say my piece, Jan. This poem pretty well sums up my attitude toward these types of people.

Caren Krutsinger

Date: 6/2/2022 3:50:00 AM

I run from them, screaming, and yet they follow, not understanding why. Lovely poem, Hank! So on target!

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 10:14:00 AM

Thanks!

Jennifer Proxenos

Date: 6/1/2022 10:31:00 PM

IHi Milton, don't care for people been rude or criticising and throwing a hint as to whom they mean or group peoples poetry into an ungracious state , I think we should all wear an evil eye I know some poets have one to ward away their bad vibes - big Greek superstition. For me it works, jealousy is rife on planet earth . Hugs and blessings Jennifer .

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/2/2022 10:16:00 AM

Thanks, Jennifer. I really appreciated your read and your thought-provoking response to my poem. Hugs to you!

Tom Cunningham

Date: 6/1/2022 3:47:00 PM

It takes all sorts I suppose and a minority I steer clear of because if you encourage them in any way they keep on coming. Tom

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/1/2022 4:19:00 PM

Oh my! That is so true, Tom. And, I even try to run the other way.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 6/1/2022 3:13:00 PM

Read your answer below. Yes, we write what is on our minds. Enjoyed the descriptions. Love our Soupers!

Jennifer Proxenos
Date: 6/1/2022 10:44:00 PM

Love your answer to Kin and do agree with you. I have over the 5 years I have been here blocked 4 poetsm. Hugs

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/1/2022 4:20:00 PM

They are, indeed. I'd say the percentage rate is about 99%. We are a splendid crowd and a marvelous poetry fraternity.

Jenna Logan

Date: 6/1/2022 12:32:00 PM

hmmm. Someone getting out of line again?

Gershon Wolf
Date: 6/1/2022 8:50:00 PM

Sometimes I don't even write 'em, let alone explain 'em. lol. ~ Another day, another something to say -- or not say, gw

L Milton Hankins
Date: 6/1/2022 3:05:00 PM

Nope. Not at all. Just letting off some steam??? I don't know. As Gershon says, "I just write 'em, I can't explain 'em." I was thinking about what I like and don't like in people. Actually, most people here on the site are very lovely and kind.