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Writing challenge - O words - Poetry Contest, Sponsor - Constance La France. Date written: 07/27/2023

Obnoxious

reprehensible 
         his unwanted advances ~
man of bad repute 

uncouth behavior 
          sexual harassment ~
cat-calling women 

brings shame upon self 
          needs attitude adjustment ~ 
simply obnoxious
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Alex Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 2:26 AM
A powerful Senryu chain on the nasty behavior of Obnoxious. Congratulations!
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:05 PM
You certainly defined this word in your descriptions. Congrats on your win, Edward! Blessings, Kim M
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 4:06 PM
Your poem pin points someone who is obnoxious down to a tee, Edward. Great choice of word, and well said. BOL in the contest.
Ibeh Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 3:22 AM
Thank you very much, SV:-)
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