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Farewell to torment, wretchedness, and uneasiness

                      The clashing edge is filled with horrendous obscurity

              A depressing and sickeningly feeble nothingness

  That steers us growingly close to looming doom


* This is a form I call "Liberum Divisa", and it's composed of a four-line verse taken from a Free Verse poem of mine called "Trust Dust Withstand Death", written on February 21, 2022. *

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Jennifer Proxenos June 2, 2022 at 9:44 AM Really scary words and thoughts caught up in this black hole, to which we are gradually approaching - a looming doom - great poetry, thought provoking my friend Lesaad. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.