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Farewell to torment, wretchedness, and uneasiness The clashing edge is filled with horrendous obscurity A depressing and sickeningly feeble nothingness That steers us growingly close to looming doom
* This is a form I call "Liberum Divisa", and it's composed of a four-line verse taken from a Free Verse poem of mine called "Trust Dust Withstand Death", written on February 21, 2022. * Liberum Divisa 8 Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Gregory Richard Barden

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Date: 6/2/2022 9:44:00 AM
Really scary words and thoughts caught up in this black hole, to which we are gradually approaching - a looming doom - great poetry, thought provoking my friend Lesaad. hugs and blessings, Jennifer.
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