Oblivious To Our Flaws

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We're feeling thoroughly swamped by waves and waves of smiling faces. And as the crowd breaks into cheers, we proudly mark our paces. With arms extended and knees bent, facing forward, we barely blink. And left-right-left-right-left, our boots strike the pavement in perfect sync. Left-left, left-right-left, drums the beat, pulling our invisible strings. And as friendly faces flash by, we strut as if our feet had wings. Precision moves, receive a roar, of instant jubilant applause. And we're feeling so empowered, we're oblivious to our flaws. (Quatrain) 5/25/2016

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Line Gauthier

Date: 3/16/2018 9:02:00 AM

Love this stanza "Left, left, left right left, drums the beat pulling our invisible strings. And as friendly faces flash by we strut as if our feet had wings."

Emile Pinet
Date: 3/16/2018 10:02:00 AM

Thanks line, I appreciate your friendly visits and encouraging comments my friend, Emile.

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 5/26/2016 10:34:00 PM

I loved the joy in this piece Emile! It is great to see you posting. I hope you are fairing well my friend. Hugs, Connie # 7

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/27/2016 10:41:00 AM

Thanks my friend, I appreciate your friendly visits and encouraging comments. Emile.

Nette Onclaud

Date: 5/26/2016 11:16:00 AM

good to read you again, emile... vibrant march of images.. huggs

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2016 3:05:00 PM

Thanks Nette, your comments help brighten my day. Emile.

Jan Allison

Date: 5/26/2016 6:42:00 AM

You brought Christmas to life with your descriptive write - what a vivid picture you painted:-) hugs Jan xx

Emile Pinet
Date: 5/26/2016 9:35:00 AM

Thanks my friend, I appreciate your friendly visits and comments. Emile.