Oblivious

She is oblivious to the fact 
That she can make  my mind Tedious
Which makes me furious 
But imagining her smiling upon 
Makes my heart troubled as ocean 
On a stromy night
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May 5, 2024 at 1:08 PM
This is my first poem, so if you could give some feedback, it will be much appreciated
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