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Oblivious

When you’re here I am oblivious to the cold, I feel warm.
When you are around, I am oblivious to the raging storm.
It just makes a nice ambiance for us to snuggle you see.
It doesn’t matter if you burn the toast, it tastes good to me.

Some overnight visitors have tactfully told me you snore.
This is news to me, my darling I am oblivious once more.
When you fail to offer help when I am quite snowed under,
I never seem to mind, don’t care, I keep my thoughts asunder.

Grass so long, as one walks through it, may be afraid of snakes.
But I am oblivious to the little amount of effort mowing takes.
Also oblivious to the state of our car when I take it for a drive.
I pick up the food and shoo out the flies, the ones that are alive.

I am so glad for the word oblivious, and it’s Constance I must thank. 
I may not have thought of this word if I hadn’t opened my think tank.
Imagine if Oblivious became I BLAME YOU, what would I have thought?
It might get so serious. Our next destination would be a divorce court.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Fernandez-Garcia Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:31 AM
Congratulations to you to. Lovely poem...!
Volumes Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 4:57 AM
Thank you very much Maria, best wishes from SV
Alex Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 2:17 AM
A thorough narration on the concept: oblivious. Congratulations!
Volumes Avatar
July 29, 2023 at 2:55 AM
Thank you for your comment Christuraj
Merryman Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 6:56 PM
A delightful write! Congrats on your win! Blessings, Kim M
Volumes Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 9:15 PM
Thank you so much Kim. I see you are also a place getter in Constance's Contest Congratulations, I am off to read your entry now. Best wishes SV
Poet Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 7:10 AM
This exquisitely crafted piece captivated me, dear SV. Certain individuals grace our existence, gently awakening our minds to precious truths that may have eluded us. S.V., your enchanting composition is reminiscent of a poetic masterpiece. Best wishes for the contest
Volumes Avatar
July 28, 2023 at 4:10 PM
Thank you Lassard, this one was a fun write, made even more enjoyable by your eloquently phrased comment. Each comment is precious to me.
Andresen Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:47 PM
- Some people come into our lives to remind us of important things, which we may have forgotten, S.V. - A lovely poem :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 3:05 PM
That is sweet of you. Thank you Anne-Lise Best wishes SV.
Narain Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 11:30 AM
Loved the poem. "It doesn’t matter if you burn the toast, it tastes good to me", was a real good start. Hope you win in Big O contest.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:08 PM
That's sweet of you Jay, encouragement like yours is worth 10 wins. I really appreciate it.
George Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 5:37 AM
There is much truth in this fun write. Only because we forgive and forget, we are able to live on. Thus to be oblivious is a blessed state. All the Best dear friend.
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 6:51 AM
I love your comments. Thanks Valsa.
Daniel Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 1:52 AM
A fun write, SV:)
Volumes Avatar
July 27, 2023 at 2:42 AM
Thanks Jo, T'was time I got out of the shadows. Glad you like it. Best wishes SV :)
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