Obedience
a quick look in the eye
and his head is up
smiling
big teeth grinning
watching me to find his cue
watch me
he prances
I can feel it and I wish i could see
but he keeps his eyes on me
then
release
run
run
bring it back
at full gallop he is all muscle and power
grabbing
turning
to run and sit in front of me
I did it
whats next
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