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Oasis of Stars

Masked behind enraging cacophony, sand dunes bathed in paranoia of fears, nascent pearls of silver seashells bubble through exuberant oasis, flickering candles give me a sign, divine symphony floats in night air, whispering mystic melodies of hope, light my heart with unwavering faith Oh so pious my lilac unfiltered wishes drip through the crevices of my dreams, then freeze under lost desert in whirlpool until the lavender song of love melts them, they shine and fuse in the universe again through rising wisps of aromatic breeze Wrapped by an enchanting rhapsody, honeyed drizzles echo my song of peace, my whispers float on the oceans of clouds, and drench the world in shooting stars June 10, 2020 BRIAN'S SELECT F,any form,any theme Poetry Contest Sponsor: Brian Strand ~Winner: First Place

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Date: 6/14/2020 7:16:00 PM
I love your hybrid of aromas, musical sounds, and celestial images to weave a calming pool of poetry. Love your title, too! Congrats on your top win, Aditi. Such a pleasure to read and re-read ~ John
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/15/2020 9:08:00 AM
So glad you love the emotions behind my poetry dear friend. Always honored by your gracious words of appreciation. Thank you for being my constant source of encouragement. God bless you. Have a great day :)
Date: 6/14/2020 7:10:00 AM
Congrats on you TOP win Aditi--brilliant write as always. Superbly done.
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/14/2020 8:19:00 AM
Thank you for your blessed words and appreciation. You are always kind to me. Blessings :)
Date: 6/10/2020 9:13:00 PM
wow this is gorgeous, you have so many unique lines to quote my favorite would be to quote most of the poem... so glad I found this one to read tonight... it's a beauty... best wishes in the contest! hugs
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/11/2020 6:12:00 AM
Really glad you love my words Sandra. Thank you for visiting and appreciating my efforts and for your wishes. Much love and blessings :)
Date: 6/10/2020 10:37:00 AM
An eloquent write. 'nascent pearls of silver light/ divine symphony floats in night air...so many great lines. A sure winner to me!
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Aditi Mishra
Date: 6/10/2020 12:24:00 PM
Glad you loved it Jeanne! Thank you for your uplifting words of love and appreciation. Much love to you :)

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