Oasis

Waterhole of love
In the midst of boundless dune
Home of countless souls
Winter, summer, spring, or fall
All year round you stand tall
Copyright © | Year Posted 2017

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April 26, 2017 at 3:55 AM
Beautiful tanka, so full of meaning. That's an oasis literally and metaphorically. Welcome to PoetrySoup :)
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April 26, 2017 at 4:02 AM
Thank you sir! Your comments are very uplifting for a nov like me. Glad to be here!
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April 26, 2017 at 3:58 AM
Thank you sir! Your comments are very uplifting for a nov like me. Glad to be here!
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