Oasis

the sky seems like an oasis
the swirls of white and blue linger
if you were to dream; nothing more
just float within the clouds whistle

the vibrations of the wind; waves
the sky seems like an oasis
birds reflect upon the river
they fly swimming with all the fish

fish that are sporadic and free
free to fear what is they could see
the sky seems like an oasis
but it does not hold each song dream

every thought could be too vast
leaving us to forget the point 
adventure that is made; not need
the sky seems like an oasis
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Kendrick Avatar
August 3, 2009 at 12:05 PM
Nice metaphor. It draws me in to the clouds. Sara
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