Oasis

Ocean in eyes of thirst Opulent tongue puddle Oz in desert, so green Orchestra of rich falls Orion’s Belt bistro Oozing delectables Oasis ovation

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:48:00 AM

Back with congratulations!! SK

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/23/2023 5:03:00 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

Date: 9/21/2023 11:49:00 AM

Lush and lovely! Congratulations on your win. :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2023 3:10:00 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Kim :) -

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2023 5:27:00 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 11:27:00 PM

Very nicely written Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/21/2023 5:26:00 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/19/2023 4:02:00 PM

A playful Pleiades. Each line brings such strong imagery. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 7:31:00 PM

Thank you so much, Jerry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/19/2023 9:51:00 AM

- Orchestra of rich falls sounds beautiful in this place, Kim - Gl in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 9/19/2023 8:34:00 AM

A lovely Pleiades, Kim. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 7:32:00 PM

Thank you, Victor! :)

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/19/2023 7:09:00 AM

My friend this is a very fine new creation. A true pleasure to read this fine morning. God bless you my good friend.

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 7:54:00 AM

Thank you so much! I appreciate you!

Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/19/2023 6:46:00 AM

Good one with the letter o. It must be another contest featuring this form. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 6:55:00 AM

Yes it is. Haven’t written for them all but jumped into the oasis ;) corny at best…lol

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/19/2023 6:01:00 AM

"Orchestra of rich falls" Love that delicate description.. "Orion's belt bistro ", " Oozing delectables" Oh wow, such a vivid and impeccable take for the Pleiades contest.. Love your creativity here, definitely captivating! Best of luck dear Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 6:22:00 AM

Thank you so much, sweet Hiya!

Regina Mcintosh

Date: 9/19/2023 5:35:00 AM

Lovely write. God bless you, Kim. Love, Gina

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 6:29:00 AM

XX Thank you, Gina!

Kim Rodrigues
Date: 9/19/2023 6:22:00 AM

XX Thank you, Gina!