Oasis

Ocean in eyes of thirst
Opulent tongue puddle
Oz in desert, so green
Orchestra of rich falls
Orion’s Belt bistro
Oozing delectables
Oasis ovation

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Sara Kendrick

September 23, 2023 at 2:48 AM

Back with congratulations!! SK

Kim Rodrigues

September 23, 2023 at 5:03 AM

Thank you, Sara!

Evelyn Judy Buehler

September 21, 2023 at 11:49 AM

Lush and lovely! Congratulations on your win. :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2023 at 3:10 PM

Thank you, Evelyn!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 20, 2023 at 4:15 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Kim :) -

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2023 at 5:27 AM

Thank you, my friend!

Joseph May

September 19, 2023 at 11:27 PM

Very nicely written Kim, Congrats on your win

Kim Rodrigues

September 21, 2023 at 5:26 AM

Thank you, Joe!

Jerry Brotherton

September 19, 2023 at 4:02 PM

A playful Pleiades. Each line brings such strong imagery. Well done, Kim.

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 7:31 PM

Thank you so much, Jerry!

Anne-Lise Andresen

September 19, 2023 at 9:51 AM

- Orchestra of rich falls sounds beautiful in this place, Kim - Gl in the contest :) - hugs

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Anne-Lise! :)

Victor Buhagiar

September 19, 2023 at 8:34 AM

A lovely Pleiades, Kim. Best for a win.

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 7:32 PM

Thank you, Victor! :)

Robert Lindley

September 19, 2023 at 7:09 AM

My friend this is a very fine new creation. A true pleasure to read this fine morning. God bless you my good friend.

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 7:54 AM

Thank you so much! I appreciate you!

Sara Kendrick

September 19, 2023 at 6:46 AM

Good one with the letter o. It must be another contest featuring this form. Thanks for sharing it with us and for dropping by my page. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 6:55 AM

Yes it is. Haven’t written for them all but jumped into the oasis ;) corny at best…lol

Hiya Sharma

September 19, 2023 at 6:01 AM

"Orchestra of rich falls" Love that delicate description.. "Orion's belt bistro ", " Oozing delectables" Oh wow, such a vivid and impeccable take for the Pleiades contest.. Love your creativity here, definitely captivating! Best of luck dear Kim :)

Kim Rodrigues

September 19, 2023 at 6:22 AM

Thank you so much, sweet Hiya!