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Written on September 18, 2023

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Oasis

Overwhelming desires Occasional oaths, vows Offerings, gentle grace Openly giving, truths Obedient to God, Observing His laws, words Omnipresent light, love
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
September 23, 2023 at 2:49 AM
Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara
Rodrigues Avatar
September 21, 2023 at 5:28 AM
Congratulations, Gina!
Andresen Avatar
September 20, 2023 at 4:15 AM
- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Gina :) -
May Avatar
September 19, 2023 at 11:29 PM
Very nicely written Gina, Congrats on your win
Brotherton Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 6:30 PM
A wonderful Pleiades Gina. I love it.
Rodrigues Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 5:53 PM
Very nice, Gina!
Sharma  Avatar
September 18, 2023 at 12:33 AM
A very profound take for the Pleiades contest, I love the lines "obedient to God", "words omnipresent light" Gracefully done in a way, so iridescent under His serenity.. Good luck for the contest, sending love :)
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