Oasis

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Written on September 18, 2023

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Overwhelming desires Occasional oaths, vows Offerings, gentle grace Openly giving, truths Obedient to God, Observing His laws, words Omnipresent light, love

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 9/23/2023 2:49:00 AM

Creative way to go with this winner. Congratulations on your work being on the winners' list. Sara

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/21/2023 5:28:00 AM

Congratulations, Gina!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 9/20/2023 4:15:00 AM

- Congratulations on your win in the Pleiades 5 Poetry Contest, Gina :) -

Joseph May

Date: 9/19/2023 11:29:00 PM

Very nicely written Gina, Congrats on your win

Jerry Brotherton

Date: 9/18/2023 6:30:00 PM

A wonderful Pleiades Gina. I love it.

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 9/18/2023 5:53:00 PM

Very nice, Gina!

Hiya Sharma

Date: 9/18/2023 12:33:00 AM

A very profound take for the Pleiades contest, I love the lines "obedient to God", "words omnipresent light" Gracefully done in a way, so iridescent under His serenity.. Good luck for the contest, sending love :)